I Fall in Sleep

Inspired by one of my favorite songs by Sia~I Go To Sleep...enjoy the music.

I lay in peace 

    you upon my head

no other thoughts

      amidst my mind

your strong shoulders

           hold me here

the scent of your manhood

           envelopes me

the heaviness of your loins

          keeps me safe

soaked in the invisible cloak

          of your heat

etched behind closed eyes 

     your silhouette

lulled by the sweet crackle

           of our fire

lingering in the grace 

      of sumptuous afterglow

         I fall under

                      the hypnotic

                                   sublimity

                                          of our splendor

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

Your words are so lovely and flowing! I awakened not too long ago, but want to go crawl back in and cuddle amongst the covers and dreams all my cares away after reading your poem and listening to the song. This is almost hypnotic and conveys a beautiful message!! Thank you for your beautiful lullaby of love!!
(And poppies are among my favorite flowers, so the video is perfect)

[Frieda P]

Mine too Shelia, so delighted this moved you, thanks.

[Dr. Wood ?]

another great one

WAKE UP

[Pete Langley]

Well, that went well then, didn`t it? What re you gonna do for the rest of the afternoon? Well done, Frieda! P.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Not only another Frieda Art of sensual romance but a beautiful inspiration too. LOVE that song! But I still contend that Chrissy Hynde nailed it and in this video she is so sensual!!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6yoR7fg2pE0
PS how do you imbed pics and music on your poems?

[icelandicblue]

First of all I love the construction of the poem. The words stream down the page in a lovely font. It adds to the sweetness of your words and sentiments. Two people spent yet the sensuality lingers beautifully.

[s y e]

This is beautifully written, I loved it. Well written as always! You are a master with words Hun, it was amazing!

[Leslie Philibert]

Fine poem, sensual with style, and written very well with loads of broken phrases, a poem that has been written with a lot of care..