Aura of Energy

Visions of a woman darkly plague the night

her strength apparent, her stride aligned

make no mistake, she knows where shes bound

deliberate steps she takes towards the eclipse

facing it straight on with forceful intensity 

she looks oddly familiar, I know not her name

she has no fear, no hesitation, her stare nostalgic,

i've looked into her eyes to seek recognition 

she nodded at me coolly saying 'look to the fated'

she vanished before i could conceive her resolve 

Reviews

[Pete Langley]

I have a man I know quite well (mainly in recall) who turns up now and again to remind me I`m off-track. I even have a conversation with him sometimes, but it`s always, it seems, in passing. He`s walking one way and I`m walking another path. Somehow, there`s never the opportunity to walk side by side to have a longer chat. I`m always distracted, going somewhere else. I love your piece, Frieda. P.

[Frieda P]

Maybe we could introduce your character to my dark shadow lady and they could explain...thanks so much Pete! x

[Pete Langley]

That`s a definite maybe, Frieda! P x

[Frieda P]

Love an oxymoron ;-)

[Rogue]

Perhaps the recognition comes from a perceived knowledge that she has been down the path you are currently on and knows what lies ahead.

Interesting and thought provoking write.

[Riley Mistwood]

Nice, i really liked this.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Your own mind's child,
when wolves howl,
and robber's prowl

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

Like a vision of the sister in the tunnel of light, quite evocative! Lovely title!

[quinfinn]

that's because you walked away from the mirror before you would listen to the whole message...always listen to that inner light, it knows what it is talking about. or.....you could just be waxing poetic for pure pleasure and whim....either way, great write!!!!

[Lover Of Words]

This is beauty beyond words,,, i love this alot going in my favorite!