Aura of Energy

Visions of a woman darkly plague the night

her strength apparent, her stride aligned

make no mistake, she knows where shes bound

deliberate steps she takes towards the eclipse

facing it straight on with forceful intensity 

she looks oddly familiar, I know not her name

she has no fear, no hesitation, her stare nostalgic,

i've looked into her eyes to seek recognition 

she nodded at me coolly saying 'look to the fated'

she vanished before i could conceive her resolve 

Reviews

[Pete Langley]

I have a man I know quite well (mainly in recall) who turns up now and again to remind me I`m off-track. I even have a conversation with him sometimes, but it`s always, it seems, in passing. He`s walking one way and I`m walking another path. Somehow, there`s never the opportunity to walk side by side to have a longer chat. I`m always distracted, going somewhere else. I love your piece, Frieda. P.

[Frieda P]

Maybe we could introduce your character to my dark shadow lady and they could explain...thanks so much Pete! x

[Pete Langley]

That`s a definite maybe, Frieda! P x

[Frieda P]

Love an oxymoron ;-)

[Blue Ivory]

Awww cliffhanger! You're good with mystery :) The first line slightly reminded me of The Lady Of Shallot. I love poetry like this. Now I can't stop wondering who that woman might've been -_-

[Frieda P]

That's funny, since my life's an open book around here apparently ;-)

Thanks muchly Siren.

[beautiful dreamer]

this is amazing frieda peta!

[Frieda P]

Ha, another name...thanks dreamer!

[beautiful dreamer]

mhm!

[luviva]

ok, this is a great one that leaves ma head bulky with thought and all ideas of who that lady might have been, so strong description and the structure and word choice just puts such an effect on the reader... great work ma fellow writter.

[Frieda P]

Oh a bulky head, join the club! Love that you took it there, thanks luviva.

[luviva]

welcome P...

[khalid]

i know you have wide imagination where you can create charchters. we all hope to be better. we can create a fictional copy of the charachter we would like to be. this charachter is our model. we make that charachter perfect because we know that we can never be perfect in real life. i think, just my own point of view, you have been talking about the charachter you wish to be like..

i loved this mind provoking piece..

[Frieda P]

And I love your mind provoking review, thanks khalid...

[khalid]

i love that you loved it..

[Tarry Franck]

Very powerful piece - great work Frieda :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Tarry :-)

[Yellow Butterfly]

I love this intriguing piece Fp...

It's as though 'someone' is looking out for you lovely lady.... :O)

[Frieda P]

I like that thought a lot, thanks YB ;-)

[KeelyJane]

Awesome. This leaves me wondering as it did you in this beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing. You have a gift lady. :)

[Frieda P]

You humble me, thanks for your kind review Keely. :-)

[SimpleMind]

I thought I saw Lady of Lorein :)

Wonderful!

[Frieda P]

Ha, never thought of that, thanks SM! :-)

[Baby Ricochet]

Good job Frieda

[Frieda P]

Thanks Baby.