If Only...IMAGINE

If Only...IMAGINE

A Poem by Frieda P
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Tribute to John Lennon ~~ you may say I'm a dreamer, but I'm not the only one...

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         If only life were as sweet as buttefly kisses,
      upon the nose of kittens
we'd not have crime or strife,
                no poverty or religious battles
no child could be abused,
               no woman battered,
politicians would fight
            for the good of the people 
there'd be no lawyer jokes
            nor homeless shelters
no person left starving
in the middle of a freezing night,
countries living in peace
          sharing knowledge & ideas
no guns, no violence, no prejudice,
 no alienation of nations~

It's no longer about self preservation
as much as it is greed
is Nirvana perhaps a quirky pipe dream
 of the deluded hopefuls
was Lennon insane when he said
"give peace a chance"
I think he lived in the delusion
 of flutterbys and kitten's 
perhaps that allusion could work
            if we all had that same dream...

'you may say I'm a dreamer, but I'm not the only one'

© 2013 Frieda P


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Frieda P


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One man impacted so many, all these years later his words & actions of peace live on..
If we all remember to act in peace, kindness, understanding in our everyday lives & decisions what a positive trickle down impact we have on those around us, strangers we encounter... our country and the world can only benefit positively..for it is not just environment that is in need of protection, but humanity needs protection.. to know love still exists, that hands are there to hold, and tears are there to share..and peace is a possible that is within all our hands... sorry to blather on...but you wrote the poem ( :

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

What, no more blathering?! ;-P
Renée

11 Years Ago

you know what they say about guests & fish q ;
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

hahahhaha



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Sadly, if we all had the same dream, I suspect we would be fighting each other to live it. The self interest of man conqures all. I`m afraid. I love the first two lines. P.

Posted 11 Years Ago


One man impacted so many, all these years later his words & actions of peace live on..
If we all remember to act in peace, kindness, understanding in our everyday lives & decisions what a positive trickle down impact we have on those around us, strangers we encounter... our country and the world can only benefit positively..for it is not just environment that is in need of protection, but humanity needs protection.. to know love still exists, that hands are there to hold, and tears are there to share..and peace is a possible that is within all our hands... sorry to blather on...but you wrote the poem ( :

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

What, no more blathering?! ;-P
Renée

11 Years Ago

you know what they say about guests & fish q ;
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

hahahhaha
As Joni Mitchell despondently sung, "They won't give peace a chance...that was just a dream some of us had"...an incredible eulogy for a man who has been the beneficiary of a lot of them...all you need is love...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

:)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Now you've got me listening to California ;-)
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

;D
He was a great man. This is a great poem. I still remember the day in high school I found out. It was so senseless.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Relic

11 Years Ago

I know people who died in 911, that's a day none of us can forget.
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Sorry to hear that, my son worked 3 blocks from there and my other son is a firefighter, he went in .. read more
Relic

11 Years Ago

From what I've heard about it I can understand why.

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Frieda P
Frieda P

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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