On Ice

Heat rises, although

                        not at these extremes

cold shoulder was palpable

                  sheets were nearly frosted

I rolled over into the tundra

                      to get side swiped by a glacial mass

             reminisces of titanic falls

                       you froze out my heart

Author's Note

The image moved me..woman on ice.

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

"Cold shoulder was palpable..." angelic meow xD

I can't even go to the place in my mind right now that stores all of the fancy review words I use because not one of them would be more effective than "Damn" and I know it.

So. Damn.

This is one of my favorites in a long-a*s list of favorites from you.

[Frieda P]

Ha 'angelic meow' love it! That's all you needed to say really ;-)
Thanks the kimmer....

[KAOlmsted]

;-) Absolutely...(I thought you might get a kick out of that) (I made myself chuckle)

[Frieda P]

Whoa Featured review too...now I'm doing the happy dance on the tabletop!

[KAOlmsted]

Me too :-D

[PP]

You froze my heart Frieda :)

[PP]

And now we have a jar of frozen hearts! LOL

[Frieda P]

Ha, that should be a song. ;-)

[PP]

hahaha..jar of frozen hearts! Lets write it..let it freeze..

[Michael G.]

Tender loving thoughts. This one melts ice... and hearts.

[Frieda P]

Ha, so glad that came across....thanks Mike.

[quinfinn]

hope i am never the target for your "gentler" writes..... this is all encompassing and eternal

[Frieda P]

Never happen huckleberry, thanks quin!

[Jack...]

I was going to tell you to take a little time and chill, but I see that is not necessary now. Another delightful, though frigid read. That warm body next to you wasn't quite as warm as you would have liked. Very nice.

[Frieda P]

Haha I beat you to it...took a chill pill... and wrote something, thanks for reading.