On Ice

Heat rises, although

                        not at these extremes

cold shoulder was palpable

                  sheets were nearly frosted

I rolled over into the tundra

                      to get side swiped by a glacial mass

             reminisces of titanic falls

                       you froze out my heart

Author's Note

The image moved me..woman on ice.

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

"Cold shoulder was palpable..." angelic meow xD

I can't even go to the place in my mind right now that stores all of the fancy review words I use because not one of them would be more effective than "Damn" and I know it.

So. Damn.

This is one of my favorites in a long-a*s list of favorites from you.

[Frieda P]

Ha 'angelic meow' love it! That's all you needed to say really ;-)
Thanks the kimmer....

[KAOlmsted]

;-) Absolutely...(I thought you might get a kick out of that) (I made myself chuckle)

[Frieda P]

Whoa Featured review too...now I'm doing the happy dance on the tabletop!

[KAOlmsted]

Me too :-D

[beautiful dreamer]

nicely done!

[Frieda P]

Thanks!

[Bronwen Cox Hollinger]

This is beautiful. It really spoke to me... You'd style reminds me of my own.

[Frieda P]

Glad you liked it Bronwen, thanks for the read & review.

[Renée]

makes my teeth chatter....burr... I need more cocoa ..

[Frieda P]

Ha, that was the idea, good! Thanks...

[Renée]

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[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Some great metaphorical references... I can feel the chill from here.

[Frieda P]

And I'm so glad you did Dale, thanks.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Where is my jacket?

[Frieda P]

Serving hot toddys instead :-P

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You know renee mentioned the other day how you corrupted her with those, LOL

[Frieda P]

Lol, don't believe her, she loved every second of it!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Of coarse I didn't, I wasn't born yesterday... it was two days ago.

[Holly Mason]

imagery is so intense with that pic behind your words so strong
thank you for sharing

[Frieda P]

the picture did it for me, thanks Holly.

[Tarry Franck]

Great imagery - nicely done

[Frieda P]

Thanks Tarry, glad you enjoyed it.

[Tarry Franck]

My pleasure

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Chillingly warm words

[Frieda P]

You would say that kiddo.... ;-)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

i just did

[icelandicblue]

You have created some powerful imagery. I like this creative piece with your fabulously clever descriptions of an icy bed.

[Frieda P]

So happy you got that feeze from it icelandblue...much appreciate the read.

[s y e]

Wow. THis was a great write!

I'm kinda speechless.... Again!

[Frieda P]

Oh thanks hon, something about that pic just spoke to me...glad you enjoyed it.

[s y e]

The picture is amazing, I loved it!

Woah! Holy Noodles!

[Frieda P]

Yep, that's basically what I thought when I saw it too!

[s y e]

Bingo! Snap, back wallop!