Soft As a Breeze

soft as a breeze on a warm summer's day

sweet like huckleberry pie

sultry heat & moonlit nights

glints that sparkle & dance on the sea

hearts afloat like kites high in the sky

canyons depths & Venus highs

poppy blooms & dark chocolate kisses

baby's breath tickles & gale force strength

kindled fires with toasts of wine

~

that's what I mean to say...

when you take my breath away

Reviews

[DIVYA]

Sugar and spice and love is all things so wonderful and nice. This lovely poem has something to offer every lover with every taste.

What it does to me..? Well, here it is!
"hearts afloat like kites high in the sky
canyons depths & Venus highs"

- Your poetic genius and flair speaks out loud and clear here Frieda! Keep penning and thrilling us all.

[Frieda P]

Woo, so happy I could float your boat with this one, or your kite, whichever, lol, thanks so much Divya.

[KAOlmsted]

And just as I finished reading this, a gentle breeze came through my open window and I whispered, "Perfect..."

[Frieda P]

Haha you just made that up! I know you're finding it hard to believe that's me....I get it. ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

*laugh* I did not make it up! The window IS open, and there is a bit of a breeze today, and, granted I was staring at my incredible rack when I whispered the word "perfect"...but it could have been directed at this write...maybe ;-)

[Frieda P]

*laugh* yourself, that doesn't even sound like you, who the hell is this anyway?! ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

"Holy cats"...convinced? ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

Meanwhile, I just saw a picture of Michael Kevin Spencer nearly naked, so I may need a minute xD Damn...that is one lovely lovely young man...just saying ;-)

[Frieda P]

Where?? Forget you....! ha

Yes, holy cats did it for me, thank gawd!

[KAOlmsted]

On his profile...I'm here to tell you...holy f*****g cats! O.O

[gombeggar]

nice simple heart expressed

[Frieda P]

Thanks for the visit and your kind words gombeggar.

[Just Simple Sounds]

Simple and deep , loved it

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much for the visit and your review JSS...much appreciated.

[Brownie]

these lines sure render a B'ful feeling.

[Frieda P]

thrilled you enjoyed it Brownie.

[Horizon K.]

Oh, to say all of that when you cant breathe... can it all be said with a kiss? Uber- romantic, how love makes us think of everything else that we love....

[Frieda P]

But of course, when you're 'in love' everything is grander, thanks Horizon!

[Renée]

makes me look at the sky and go .."Yeah" lol delightfully sweet !

[Frieda P]

Ha 'Yeah', as are you, thanks Renee!

[Renée]

i am more tissue stuffed, nyquil infused right now lol .. a delight Frieda !

[Frieda P]

At least you're not cranky...! ;-)

[Renée]

take a lot to make me cranky..but once I am cage me up q ;

[Frieda P]

Wow sounds exactly moi! Lol ;-P

[s y e]

This was outstanding as always hun, I loved it and thoroughly enjoyed it!

[Frieda P]

Why thank you my little farfalle, so happy you liked it. x

[s y e]

Loved it, welcome!

[Marie]

Very nice imagry..."dark chocolatek isses"...

[Frieda P]

Has to be dark, thanks Marie.

[kublakhan27]

Breathtaking indeed...wonderful ;)

[Frieda P]

Grazie my sweet friend :-)

[kublakhan27]

;)