Posing as a Posy

'cheeky', yes, I know I do it too...

Does it really matter if your poetry makes sense

mix it all together, throw in a bunch of metaphors

let everyone else do the work and figure it out

if you've got writer's block maybe it's your brain

telling you to stop thinking in similes

sometimes a garden is just a bed of flowers

 and not some woman's posy

Reviews

[Yellow Butterfly]

Absolutely Brilliant piece here Fp :O)

If I was to write a poem for my review it would have all the ingredients you've mentioned and would read like this..

She is a singer, song writer, a mother too
Very similar I would say are the both you
Writing songs about life as she knows it
Writing your poetry that bites the bullet
Written words to thought provoke and test
Just like her song you are truly simply the best!

Oh dear I'm sure there's something else I wanted to say
Seems that pesky writers block has caught me up today

Lol I've remembered ..Great work Fp have a nice day! :O)

[Frieda P]

Lol is that a rap? :-)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Hahahaha..... yep.... lol :O)

[Frieda P]

I hope you're the one singing, I'm tone deaf I think! ;-P

[Yellow Butterfly]

lol :O)

[redflutterby]

Lol.... fooking cheeky are ya??? ;-p
I like this...but I like everything I've read by you.

[Frieda P]

Only on days that end with 'y'! :-P

Thanks so much A.M.!

[quinfinn]

so true, posy. you know i am fond of saying that poetry is all in the individual interpretation. sometimes, when we write, we don't even really know what we are saying until we look at the finished product, and then it reveals itself. this is where the muse resides, and why we need to feel that presence in our writing...to explain and embrace our deepest thoughts. kudos to you, dear poet, for bringing this to light. awesome....

[Frieda P]

Thanks quin, I knew you'd get it....always a breath of fresh air from your reviews, thanks! x

[Jack...]

Hmmm very thought provoking...it feels very deep to me...let me see if I got your meaning...metaphors...brain...flowers, and a pocket full of posies...hmm...nah I don't get it. :)>

Very cool oh great one.

[Frieda P]

Me either. ;-)

Grazie....

[Lover Of Words]

ahhh everything you write is amazing

[Frieda P]

ahhh, you are amazing my dear friend, thanks!

[Lover Of Words]

Your welcome

[Frieda P]

;-)

[Lover Of Words]

you knock me off my feet every time

[Frieda P]

Ha, well dust yourself off, I'll give you a hand Kelsbells! ;-)

[Lover Of Words]

hahaha your awesome