~I Take You in...

Follow me

              into this haven

       of serenity

feel my soul

           upon your lips

touch the breath

        of my fervor 

escape with me 

            to  surrender

       intoxicate my euphoria

             to release

       smother my exhilaration

            in exaltation

submit to the longing

          in my loins

       enter into my soft lightness

I take you in

             as a deep inhale

you splay the nape of

sweet gasping whispers 

               the world has moved

  anointed with nirvana's

                          

 sweet death

whilst entangled

                 in rapturous

                       pause

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

I did that in the hot tub last night...amazing how I can still get my feet up that high with the help of bubbling water ;-) I kneed myself in the nose a couple of times, hurt like hell...and one of the jets left an imprint on my left butt cheek...all in all, not my favorite position...at least doggy style I can still drink my drink...

Oh...did you write a poem? Hm...yes...it's quite lovely...quite lovely indeed...

[quinfinn]

damnit kimmers! i just spewed beer all over my keyboard!!!!!

[KAOlmsted]

xD

[Frieda P]

Holy cats!! ha, this has got to down in history as a review on the WC..and it's Featured!! You're a nutter, love you to pieces, thanks!

[KAOlmsted]

;-) Always my pleasure, ma'am...

[Frieda P]

Ha they didn't kick you out of AL yet? ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

Morgan and I decided to skip it...he left before 7 this morning. I slept until 9:30 ;-)

[Frieda P]

Oh sweet, you're having a mother/daughter day, is she drinking too? ;-P

[KAOlmsted]

She may as well be, I bought her a Mountain Dew this morning...the child is insane on Mountain Dew. I should just skip the middle man and mainline sugar and caffeine straight into her veins xD

[Frieda P]

Hahaha my poor little kimmer, she has no chance, no chance at all! Lol

[Holly Mason]

very loving with promises and longing hinted at
what words you use always placed so beautifully
I take you in as a deep inhale...wow
thank you for sharing

[AYVID N]

Well Frieda! Here is your answer! Now lets see if he doesn't come drooling and gasping!
This invite is full of the promise of Nirvana. No hot-blooded loin could remain un-stirred reading this! Thanks for sharing!

[The 13th Eros]

Only one who knows the darkest of shadows can experience such unyielding, white-hot bliss... Your confessions flow like rivers after the rain... Just for the record, I am officially submitting to your loins. You create a world so heavenly in your words.

[SimpleMind]

Great! Now I'm gonna read this again! XD

[Frieda P]

Woo, can't ask for a better review than that, thanks so much.

[s y e]

Holy jeez!
Wow! That was hotttt!!!!!
Omg this was great! Loved it!

[Frieda P]

Holy jeez, thanks for this great review farfalle!

[s y e]

Anytime love!