You know I love rhyme. You killed it in this piece.
The topic is one I also love and ponder daily. You personified this style of painting and analogized this with the human mind and condition. It is funny how not only others can paint an illusion that we fall for, but at times we paint the illusion ourselves and therefore have no one else to blame.
Truly enjoyed this one. You have a lot up your sleeve.
Whoa deep review, I love it...so glad you like this one Cyn, I am really terrible at rhyming, not my.. read moreWhoa deep review, I love it...so glad you like this one Cyn, I am really terrible at rhyming, not my style, but this one I just felt it. Thanks so much for your great review.
11 Years Ago
No problem. You're actually good at the rhyme. Try it more.
11 Years Ago
It always feels so strained to me, not natural, I don't think in rhyme, well I do but that's another.. read moreIt always feels so strained to me, not natural, I don't think in rhyme, well I do but that's another story ;-)
Well, I guess we all have to rhyme sometime ;-) I have some of this art work on my own walls...it's amazing stuff, really. I can't even draw a stick figure xD Nice work, lady.
You know I love rhyme. You killed it in this piece.
The topic is one I also love and ponder daily. You personified this style of painting and analogized this with the human mind and condition. It is funny how not only others can paint an illusion that we fall for, but at times we paint the illusion ourselves and therefore have no one else to blame.
Truly enjoyed this one. You have a lot up your sleeve.
Whoa deep review, I love it...so glad you like this one Cyn, I am really terrible at rhyming, not my.. read moreWhoa deep review, I love it...so glad you like this one Cyn, I am really terrible at rhyming, not my style, but this one I just felt it. Thanks so much for your great review.
11 Years Ago
No problem. You're actually good at the rhyme. Try it more.
11 Years Ago
It always feels so strained to me, not natural, I don't think in rhyme, well I do but that's another.. read moreIt always feels so strained to me, not natural, I don't think in rhyme, well I do but that's another story ;-)
Deceit in reality...you must have looked through the same window I did haha A nice little assessment of visual art and its varying effects on an individual...you still get all the cool captchas though ;P
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11 Years Ago
I think so...I can't believe you never get any good captchas, I'm not the only one here, I've had ot.. read moreI think so...I can't believe you never get any good captchas, I'm not the only one here, I've had other people tell me the same that they relate, you must have the abstract version, like you... ;-P
these words are so true...
beautiful picture...have you ever seen intense sand art?I am originally from Florida and the art is amazing...would be even more so with your words*)
the illusion of perfection but do we really know
thank you for sharing
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11 Years Ago
Yes it's fantastic, one of my writes has a photo included with sand art, I forget which one...thanks.. read moreYes it's fantastic, one of my writes has a photo included with sand art, I forget which one...thanks so much for your review Holly.
we are living in the age of allusion. between reality and imagination there is a very tiny transparent thread which makes reality an allusion. it was said, dont believe everything you see nor half of what you hear, but i think now, we cant believe neither what we hear nor what we see since the reality has never become clear as it was. most pictures are made up, most talks are treated in a way to make it be fake...
but i really believe, your poem is unbelievable..
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11 Years Ago
So sweet always in your review khalid, thanks so much for your insightful words.
11 Years Ago
sweet poems must be reviewed with sweet words, i do my best..
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..