Stoke Me Senryu

It's all in the 'feel'

you gazed into my brown eyes

...as you stroked my thighs

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

eyes and thighs, a great combination! Sensual and love the play on words.

[Frieda P]

So true! Thanks Barbara.

[Michael G.]

Sexellent senryu again! (I prefer using light circular motions start from the knee. But then, what do I know.) I like the eye contact.
Great touch! (Pun intended.)

[Frieda P]

Ha, big smile with this review, thanks Michael!

[Coyote Poetry]

A lot said in so few words. A gentle touch can lead to good places. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

thanks John.

[quinfinn]

nothing is hotter (in my opinion) than eye contact during the most intimate of moments. but you knew that, didn't you, brown eyed girl? clever senryu, very yummy write.

[Frieda P]

Very yummy review, you know me so well huckleberry!

[Jack...]

Love those brown eyes and those smooth...um...well...very nice Frieda

[Frieda P]

Ha, I think I know where you were going with that one... ;-)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Hot title, hot senryu... hot loins.... hahah

Loved this one.... and the feather too.. :O)

[Frieda P]

ha, all your hot reads got me hot, so I had to write this one! ;-)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Hahaha your too funny Fp.....glad my words were of some use.. Lol

[Frieda P]

Ha not everyone thinks so! ;-)

Thanks again...

[kublakhan27]

I wholly agree...hand-eye coordination is overrated in bed ;P

[Frieda P]

Well we know it's all in the dance & tea ;-)

[kublakhan27]

Indeed ;)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

If you do not 'feel' there is only sex and sex lacks one vital ingredient.

[Frieda P]

You said it John....

[Emerald Seas]

Hubba hubba! Lol - someone is feisty this morning

[Frieda P]

Ha, there was only one way to depart from death!

[Blue Ivory]

Gave me goosebumps :3 Great write!

[Frieda P]

Goosebumps are good, yes? ;-)

[Blue Ivory]

yes they are :D