Stoke Me Senryu

It's all in the 'feel'

you gazed into my brown eyes

...as you stroked my thighs

Reviews

[Ruth]

Pinched my heart in three outstanding lines, wow xoxxo

[KAOlmsted]

Le pant, le pant ;-) Intoxicating read, this...left me wanting more. I never know when to say when!

[Angel of Heart's]

I have intentionally held off commenting on this because I wanted to come to it without distractions....some quiet time to simply fall into the beauty that you've unleashed into this exquisite creation of beauty....I could write one of those comments that go on for days, but I don't want to distract from the quiet hush this finds my heart in....I will simply say that you've done it again....you've written something that wraps around my own heart in whispers that I can hear in between every breath....

[Baby Ricochet]

Perfect!

[Sheila Kline]

Oooh la la!! Yes, yes..........feel the passion of the touch and feel as if soaring along on the wings of ecstasy!! Perhaps it was "Wings of Fire"!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Very delightfully sensual Frieda.

[beautiful dreamer]

you and your senryus! i could never get a senryu. i am bad at counting syllables!

[khalid]

eyes can tell whatever tongue cant. just a look with desire into eyes by a lover can make the beloved melt. from eyes to thighs, everything will feel so nice..

[Frieda P]

eyes first.... thanks khalid :-)

[khalid]

eyes first, middle and end ..lol

[Gerald Parker]

You really mean the suggestive 'stoke'?

[Frieda P]

...like fuel to fire.

[Gerald Parker]

And no need to look at the mantelpiece while you stoke the fire.

[Frieda P]

...then you're doing it wrong.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I am a leg man so I really loved this... very sexy.

[Frieda P]

So you like thighs, ha...thanks Dale.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes I do, very much.

[Frieda P]

ha that's what I figured sir :-)