The poem starts with "I'm in a weekend" giving the sensation of limited time, yet freedom of no other type. then the poem speaks of things that are done in the easy pace, the weekend pace. all slow .
The poem includes numerous sensual situations : "easy pace" reminds heart pace , "like waves..flowing towards nothing" , "easy breezy", " chilled drink " ..
and to top it, you add a partner to the crime "together perhaps" build a castle of sand that reaches the sky . a fun task I may say, one that can burn all the weekend . Leading me to the understanding that weekends are meant to be spend with others while doing fun stuff.
Thank you for sharing such an extraordinary poem.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
I love how you refer to it as 'crime', thanks so much for the great review and pausing on my page..... read moreI love how you refer to it as 'crime', thanks so much for the great review and pausing on my page...MrKnowAll, cheeky name btw.
Deep sigh.. that's what the weekend is for. And there you are strolling on the sandy beach with nothing on your mind but putting one foot in front of the other. Enjoy every throbbing inch of your weekend. ;)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
ha you've such a way with words...'throbbing inch', youch! ;-)
Thanks for the lovely p.. read moreha you've such a way with words...'throbbing inch', youch! ;-)
Thanks for the lovely pic...it was a definitively riveting inspiration.
11 Years Ago
Have a very happy weekend indeed. You're deserving. :)
Nice pace and feel, just as a weekend described within the lines. I don't know what these mythical easy going weekends are that you speak of - but they sound divine! Nicely penned!
Oh, I will post a few pics from NOLA soon. It was fun. Opened my eyes a bit, too. Eventually the trip will inspire some writing. Busy week and I'm headed to NY to pick up the man cub early in the morning for spring break. Breathe... One day I will get to chill - just like in your poem! ;)
Ha old memories from 'down the shore' as we joisey people say! Hey you'll be in the neighborhood, st.. read moreHa old memories from 'down the shore' as we joisey people say! Hey you'll be in the neighborhood, stop for some cheer! ;-)
11 Years Ago
Oh, I wish! I make this insane drive in one day - leave around 4 am, grab the child then turn around.. read moreOh, I wish! I make this insane drive in one day - leave around 4 am, grab the child then turn around and head home to VA. I have a job to finish up for a client on Sunday. After this one, I'm hanging up the freelance work for a while. Burnt out!
11 Years Ago
OMG you're even more insane that I originally thought! ;-)
Making that trip in a day cr.. read moreOMG you're even more insane that I originally thought! ;-)
Making that trip in a day crazy, the things we do for our kids...! Hope you get some R&R soon, yeah I can smell you burning from here!
Are you mocking me? LOL, this is more than relatable, Frieda. This is tailored fit. Okay, I'm gonna go back to my paperwork and dream of a better place.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Yes, I wrote this specifically to mock you, dang, I forgot to put that in the author's note! Still .. read moreYes, I wrote this specifically to mock you, dang, I forgot to put that in the author's note! Still dreaming.....?
The poem starts with "I'm in a weekend" giving the sensation of limited time, yet freedom of no other type. then the poem speaks of things that are done in the easy pace, the weekend pace. all slow .
The poem includes numerous sensual situations : "easy pace" reminds heart pace , "like waves..flowing towards nothing" , "easy breezy", " chilled drink " ..
and to top it, you add a partner to the crime "together perhaps" build a castle of sand that reaches the sky . a fun task I may say, one that can burn all the weekend . Leading me to the understanding that weekends are meant to be spend with others while doing fun stuff.
Thank you for sharing such an extraordinary poem.
Posted 11 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
I love how you refer to it as 'crime', thanks so much for the great review and pausing on my page..... read moreI love how you refer to it as 'crime', thanks so much for the great review and pausing on my page...MrKnowAll, cheeky name btw.
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..