Weekend State of Mind

..thanks Eros for the inspiring pic xo

I'm in a weekend

          state of mind

have no concept of time

          or space

just know it's going to be

    an easy pace

like waves rolling on the surf

flowing towards nothing

 but  a retreat

easy breezy thinking,

              and repeat

dip my toes in slowly, 

feel the breeze on my face

              chilled drink 

              and a soft comfy chair so sumblime

      would you care to dance me

                             in the sand

who knows,

together perhaps

             a castle we can build

                         to touch the sky

Reviews

[MrKnowAll]

The poem starts with "I'm in a weekend" giving the sensation of limited time, yet freedom of no other type. then the poem speaks of things that are done in the easy pace, the weekend pace. all slow .

The poem includes numerous sensual situations : "easy pace" reminds heart pace , "like waves..flowing towards nothing" , "easy breezy", " chilled drink " ..

and to top it, you add a partner to the crime "together perhaps" build a castle of sand that reaches the sky . a fun task I may say, one that can burn all the weekend . Leading me to the understanding that weekends are meant to be spend with others while doing fun stuff.

Thank you for sharing such an extraordinary poem.

[Frieda P]

I love how you refer to it as 'crime', thanks so much for the great review and pausing on my page...MrKnowAll, cheeky name btw.

[SinglePoet]

I absolutely love this! It's a refreshing read...
"easy, breezy thinking" Wonderful line.

[cafe freddo]

I can so relate to the weekend state of mind. This is a wonderful poem that I would love to print out and put up on my wall, it is so peaceful and wonderful.

[Frieda P]

What a lovely sentiment, thanks so much for your review cafe freddo.

[EChaps]

I can totally relate! Thanks for the cool poem.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much for the visit EChaps, much appreciated.

[Sirius King]

this was me... until i got called into work this morning! ugh ill be stuck here all day...i hate the world right now :-(

lol

[Frieda P]

Awh sorry, there's always tomorrow, thanks for the visit :-)

[Sirius King]

maybe lol...always a pleasure :-)

[Frieda P]

Guess you must be home already, enjoy the rest of your weekend! ;-)

[Sirius King]

naw ill be here until 12am ugh lol

u2! :-)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

I love the easy feel of this piece...no dark, brooding nostalgia here, just positive, palpable beauty and softness. I wish that I could get myself into a "weekend state of mind" a little more often. Nicely written.

[Frieda P]

thanks GF, I wasn't until I was inspired by the picture to be honest, thanks for reading...

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Ah...I see. Well, you helped brighten my day with it, so thank you :)

[Frieda P]

Happy to do so...pay it forward right? :-)

[Rogue]

Light airy and lovely are these words. I am instantly there, a drink in my hand, waltzing with a sand crab or two. :)
Thank you for the beautiful vision.

[Frieda P]

Thank you for reading...cheers! :-)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"would you car to dance me/in the sand"

such phrasing.

this is timely for me...we have a break from school...a week's worth of weekend.

just wish i could go back to the innocence and worry free time of childhood...

seems really hard to totally relax as we get older and are beseiged by life.

[Frieda P]

How lovely for you, I expect lots of writes from you...thanks for the great review jacob.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I don't have to be me till Monday... just reading the poem puts me in that carefree zone. A sweet and smooth poem.

[Frieda P]

Just clue me in on who you are today, so I can be prepared Dale... ;-)

Thanks hun!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I would but even I don't know that answer, LOL

[Eagle Cruagh]

A weekend sublime.
'What I`m reading is a beautiful woman spending her
weekend at the beach, laid back , enjoying the surf and
the occasional surfer that wanders by her cottage.
A cute poem and one that leads one to dream.
Thank You
------ Eagle Cruagh

[Frieda P]

Ooh lala, love this review, love the word sublime...it's gonna be a good day! ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

Fun , joyful read with breezy wind of words and dreamy moments to cherish . Keep you quill flowing with ink...::)

[Frieda P]

You too my friend, you too...and thanks! ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)