Weekend State of Mind

Weekend State of Mind

A Poem by Frieda P
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..thanks Eros for the inspiring pic xo

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I'm in a weekend
          state of mind
have no concept of time
          or space
just know it's going to be
    an easy pace
like waves rolling on the surf
flowing towards nothing
 but  a retreat
easy breezy thinking,
              and repeat
dip my toes in slowly, 
feel the breeze on my face
              chilled drink 
              and a soft comfy chair so sumblime
      would you care to dance me
                             in the sand
who knows,
together perhaps
             a castle we can build
                         to touch the sky

© 2013 Frieda P


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The poem starts with "I'm in a weekend" giving the sensation of limited time, yet freedom of no other type. then the poem speaks of things that are done in the easy pace, the weekend pace. all slow .

The poem includes numerous sensual situations : "easy pace" reminds heart pace , "like waves..flowing towards nothing" , "easy breezy", " chilled drink " ..

and to top it, you add a partner to the crime "together perhaps" build a castle of sand that reaches the sky . a fun task I may say, one that can burn all the weekend . Leading me to the understanding that weekends are meant to be spend with others while doing fun stuff.

Thank you for sharing such an extraordinary poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I love how you refer to it as 'crime', thanks so much for the great review and pausing on my page..... read more



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I absolutely love this! It's a refreshing read...
"easy, breezy thinking" Wonderful line.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I can so relate to the weekend state of mind. This is a wonderful poem that I would love to print out and put up on my wall, it is so peaceful and wonderful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

What a lovely sentiment, thanks so much for your review cafe freddo.
I can totally relate! Thanks for the cool poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much for the visit EChaps, much appreciated.
this was me... until i got called into work this morning! ugh ill be stuck here all day...i hate the world right now :-(

lol

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

11 Years Ago

maybe lol...always a pleasure :-)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Guess you must be home already, enjoy the rest of your weekend! ;-)
Sirius King

11 Years Ago

naw ill be here until 12am ugh lol

u2! :-)
I love the easy feel of this piece...no dark, brooding nostalgia here, just positive, palpable beauty and softness. I wish that I could get myself into a "weekend state of mind" a little more often. Nicely written.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

thanks GF, I wasn't until I was inspired by the picture to be honest, thanks for reading...
Girl Friday (Sarah W.)

11 Years Ago

Ah...I see. Well, you helped brighten my day with it, so thank you :)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Happy to do so...pay it forward right? :-)
Light airy and lovely are these words. I am instantly there, a drink in my hand, waltzing with a sand crab or two. :)
Thank you for the beautiful vision.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reading...cheers! :-)
"would you car to dance me/in the sand"

such phrasing.

this is timely for me...we have a break from school...a week's worth of weekend.

just wish i could go back to the innocence and worry free time of childhood...

seems really hard to totally relax as we get older and are beseiged by life.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

How lovely for you, I expect lots of writes from you...thanks for the great review jacob.
I don't have to be me till Monday... just reading the poem puts me in that carefree zone. A sweet and smooth poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Just clue me in on who you are today, so I can be prepared Dale... ;-)

Thanks hun!
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

I would but even I don't know that answer, LOL
A weekend sublime.
'What I`m reading is a beautiful woman spending her
weekend at the beach, laid back , enjoying the surf and
the occasional surfer that wanders by her cottage.
A cute poem and one that leads one to dream.
Thank You
------ Eagle Cruagh

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ooh lala, love this review, love the word sublime...it's gonna be a good day! ;-)
Fun , joyful read with breezy wind of words and dreamy moments to cherish . Keep you quill flowing with ink...::)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

You too my friend, you too...and thanks! ;-)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

^^~^^ :)

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