Warm Space

You are my warm place

        that safe haven to land

                 at the end of a hectic day

you are that cozy blanket 

             with soft fuzzys come to play

      joy, bliss and rapture all enveloped

 in a tiny package

     when my head is in a frenetic pace, 

i come to this space

        my heart rate settles, my soul dances,

                my mind erases the chaos

and all is right

                       with the world once again

Author's Note

Reviews

[quinfinn]

"she's well acquainted with the touch of a velvet hand like a lizard on a windowpane" okay, now you've done it. just my fave member of my fave band of all time singing one of my fave songs....hmmm.... but , somehow, i don't think this is where your poem is coming from, even though it is an excellent choice in musical accompaniment. terrific write! ......bang, bang, shoot, shoot

[Frieda P]

I just like to keep you confuzzled. ;-)

Thanks huckleberry....

[quinfinn]

you excel at that, my dear

[Frieda P]

haha you're not the first one that's told me that quin dear!

[quinfinn]

as i suspected

[Frieda P]

ah you love me and you know it :-P

Featured review again, this is getting to be a habit x

[quinfinn]

no argument here...i give good review...look at my standing on the writers page...sheesh!

[An owl on the moon]

Smiling... your words are a haven, as is your heart. I wish everyone could have such a safe place of rest...

[Frieda P]

I was hoping we could bottle it, thanks Craig. ;-)

[An owl on the moon]

Now you're thankin! :D

[The 13th Eros]

A soul is a sweet shelter, a haven like no other. Cling to them and their music and find them like rain washing away the dust of days. This is extravagant, dear poet.

[Frieda P]

Special review, thanks so much Eros...

[Blue Ivory]

Don't we all want something like that? It's a sweet poem C:

[Frieda P]

ha saw this on the live feed, even us psychotics can do sweet occasionally ;-)

[Blue Ivory]

yep ;)

[Holly Mason]

a warm place love this piece very much
soft fuzzy's come to play-I felt like I was wrapped in a comfortable warm blanket
images so vivid
thank you for sharing your warm fuzzy's*)

[Frieda P]

Awh, don't you just love warm fuzzy's, I'd share them with you any day Holly, thanks!

[beautiful dreamer]

wow i see what the fuss is about about your writing it's wonderful! i hope someday i can write as well as you..

[Frieda P]

ha you must be talking to snuffaluffagus and farfalle!! Thanks so much...

[beautiful dreamer]

oh yes lol

[Frieda P]

figures I pay them to say nice stuff about me ;-)

[beautiful dreamer]

lol oh i'm so sure lol naw your work doesn't need payment to be complimented

[redflutterby]

We all need a soft place to fall...a secure oasis to recharge our souls. Beautiful poem...you have such talent!!!

[Frieda P]

Wow, thanks for this review A.M.

[redflutterby]

You are very welcome. :-)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Getting lazy in the production line your quality control elves missed the repeat of the same word in two lines, tisk, tisk!
You are my warm place
that safe spot to land
was going to say space but you used it later on lol!

[Frieda P]

I did that on purpose to give you something concrete to b***h about this time John! ;-P

[Lover Of Words]

This is lovely :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks sweet Kelsey, enjoy your weekend! xo

[Lover Of Words]

Your welcome I will do that

[Frieda P]

Don't let your aunt talk you into anything crazy, or if she does, enjoy! ;-)

[Lover Of Words]

hahhaaha who knows whats going to happen

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

this poems makes me want cuddles!

[Frieda P]

ha first time I ever saw that one in a review, thanks MKS!

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

I've been contempatling what moves you to write and I saw the pic of your sister...I'm not one for typical comments I guess. I hope you are finding peace.

[Frieda P]

Thanks, that touched my heart, she's lovely, isn't she?

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

Was she sensitive, what kind of a person was she?

[Frieda P]

There really are no words to be honest, everyone loved her, she was truly a beautiful person on the inside, and breathtaking in all regards.

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

well it takes courage to end your life, it's free-will at its best. I don't agree when people say it's cowardly. I know it's a crazy question, and sorry if it's too personal, but why do you believe she chose that for herself?

[Frieda P]

I'm sure it does, it's rather selfish but i get it, I just want her back...we had the same history, although her note didn't say much...just a bunch of sorry's....

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

I guess sorries and I loveyous only go so far, we all have our karma. Hardest for the loved ones who miss her surely.