Warm Space

You are my warm place

        that safe haven to land

                 at the end of a hectic day

you are that cozy blanket 

             with soft fuzzys come to play

      joy, bliss and rapture all enveloped

 in a tiny package

     when my head is in a frenetic pace, 

i come to this space

        my heart rate settles, my soul dances,

                my mind erases the chaos

and all is right

                       with the world once again

Author's Note

Reviews

[quinfinn]

"she's well acquainted with the touch of a velvet hand like a lizard on a windowpane" okay, now you've done it. just my fave member of my fave band of all time singing one of my fave songs....hmmm.... but , somehow, i don't think this is where your poem is coming from, even though it is an excellent choice in musical accompaniment. terrific write! ......bang, bang, shoot, shoot

[Frieda P]

I just like to keep you confuzzled. ;-)

Thanks huckleberry....

[quinfinn]

you excel at that, my dear

[Frieda P]

haha you're not the first one that's told me that quin dear!

[quinfinn]

as i suspected

[Frieda P]

ah you love me and you know it :-P

Featured review again, this is getting to be a habit x

[quinfinn]

no argument here...i give good review...look at my standing on the writers page...sheesh!

[s y e]

Aw this was great! Sweet! I loved it, it's something that just 'relaxes' you in a way.... Awk I'm bein all weird and not makin no sense, my bad xP

[Frieda P]

That made perfect sense, what are you talking about...thanks farfalle! xo

[s y e]

Yeaaaaah.... Thought so, me bad :-P

[Frieda P]

I think you need to relax and take deep breaths hon ;-)

[s y e]

-takes deep breaths- oooft I am pooped!

[Deeper La'jik]

There's a mysterious element to this. It's very personal yet universal poem

[Frieda P]

Love your review DLj, thanks so much.

[kublakhan27]

She's not a girl who misses much...especially when a finger is on her trigger...I'm tempted to say take ten steps and jump that blanket, but I think I'd be missing the point...not enough warmth in my head these days I guess ;P

[Frieda P]

I find that hard to believe, just don't start out on the cat, when you get it back... ;-)

[kublakhan27]

;)

[khalid]

simply and hopefully, this must be sung. many poems sung while they dont have such nice musical flow as that you have created here.

[Frieda P]

You can sing it then, I'd scare everyone away if I even hummed it, I'm pretty sure I'm tone deaf, thanks for the lovely review khalid.

[khalid]

lol i can never sing it, i meant that it should be sung(professionally)by a professional singer..

[Constance Payne]

Very Nicely Written,
It could lead the imagination to so many places as we all have our own "fuzzys" that settle our mind.
It could be the love of our life or simply a comfortable bed.
Thank You for sharing.

[Frieda P]

Yep, I agree, everyone's warm fuzzy's are different, thanks for reading Constance.

[Michael G.]

Good thought, lovely write. Nice to have a place that calms you and helps you right the world

[Frieda P]

Thanks Michael, I had a moment. :-)

[Michael G.]

Your "moments" are better and larger than my days.

[icelandicblue]

To have a haven is to have everything.

Well said.

[Frieda P]

Thanks icelandicblue...not that's a chilly name, glad you enjoyed it!

[Annabelle Lee]

We all need that place or that person that's able to make the worst day better. This was fantastic!!!

[Frieda P]

Thanks Annabelle Lee, see, that wasn't so hard, was it? ;-)

[Annabelle Lee]

no ma'am

[Frieda P]

:-D

[KeelyJane]

Reading this poem creates the feeling of the warm space you speak of. Lovely piece.

[Frieda P]

Oh thanks Keely, I was hoping that would come across.

[Claire Twinn]

A poem to snuggle up to! Not sure what fuzzys are but sounds comforting.

[Frieda P]

ha you English people, I just had to explain that to my friend from Manchester too, you'd think we spoke a totally different language ;-)
...warm fuzzy's are something that make you feel all warm and yummy inside. Thanks for the review Claire.

[Claire Twinn]

ok that's what I thought. It's so weird when we have to translate a shared language isn't it!

[Frieda P]

Very, I'm amazed at how 'different' words take on new meaning...