Boogie Nights

Written with k in mind, would you care to Boogie? ;-)

might i dance on your soul

     for just a little while

nothing frantic,

        just a little intermezzo

 till we meet

somewhere in the middle

             of ecstasy and death

such is the honeyed quirks

             of life's dulcet melody

       sweep me off my feet

                to another dimension, 

              tango entangle me

                      flip a dizzying spin

                 before you whip us asunder

             melded into oblivion's

              blissful mesh

              dance me

                            till the end of frenzy

if by morning 

            we hear the same tune

  leave your boogie shoes

 under the bed  

i'll bring you tea

             drenched in elation

if you let me dance

                  on your soul for a while

Author's Note

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

I feel like dancing - in the tain,
All I need is a volunteer -
Dancing - what a damn jolly good idea -
It's such a jollification - as a matter of fact, so tres charmant my dear -
Freddy Mercury

I think I was suffering from Saturday Night Fever last night...this was a nice remedy...of course, how can you not feel better when someone writes a poem about you? ;) Glad I was able to conjure up such colourful imagery...tea, tango, entanglement? Yes please...thank you Frieda :)

[Frieda P]

Ha! Now I'm picturing you in white polyester! What kind of shoes go with that outfit I wonder. You know I had to write a 'dancing' one after those remarks, thanks for the inspiration Steve... ;-)

[kublakhan27]

Haha well I do have white pants that I wear from time to time but they're not polyester ;P Mind you, I wouldn't mind having those thick-soled shoes that make me a foot taller...glad I was able to inspire you, that makes me happy ;)

[Sirius King]

love it...even the way you chose to place the words, as if the poem its self were dancing

there's a song called "Boogie Nights"...its stuck in my head now lol

[Frieda P]

ha funny you should say, I thought of that song too and Boogie Oogie Oogie

thanks for the review, still singing? ;-)

[Sirius King]

i wasnt... but now im back at it lol

[Frieda P]

Lol! ha!

[Sirius King]

;-)

[Sirius King]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iKH7BHzq_VM

the outfits are the best! lol

[Sirius King]

[Frieda P]

Lol I think I have that outfit in the back of my closet ;-P

Nice dance moves too............!

[Sirius King]

lol...right lol

[Sami Khalil]

somewhere in the middle
of ecstasy and death
such is the honeyed quirks
of life's dulcet melody.
I love and admire your choice of words and mind scenes for they transport us to your world of magic and enchantment...

[Frieda P]

Ooo, thanks Sami, love your excellent review!

[Sami Khalil]

Most welcome ....:):):)