Heedful Caution

Heedful Caution

A Poem by Frieda P

I implore you
please don't impart
 your heart to me,
 your essence
         is the lovely warmth of potpourri

There are damages broken 
beyond repair
          exposed in me
you'd not survive 
 the depth of inky waters

There are no flutterby kisses
     on the fiery horizon
death's door captured my head
   and hung it out to dry
you fall on me,
you're sure to get burnt

What you've captured is a facade
 covering ravaged afflictions
to foray onto these grounds
         would be like quick sand eruptions


  Eaten alive, a chain reaction
           plunging descent into Hades
 ask the bodies strewn
                  along the way

               In my lovely plot of the dead
                  my twisted garden
                    cultivated methodically, 
    dark debris marks it doom

© 2013 Frieda P


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as i read this, my heart cries for your tortured psyche...my eyes tear up for your bleeding soul and i would impart to you only the gentlest wishes for happiness, only the truest of all empathy and loving understanding. it seems the best and brightest of us sometimes have too many demons to quell their fears and anxieties and are richly deserving of so much better. this is a straight to the heart and deeply moving warning of your own idiosyncratic proclivities, self destructive and yet, all for self preservation. i love your gentle heart, frieda...it truly shines through in all your writes.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

'Idiosyncratic proclivities'....nice way to put it huckleberry quin...thanks so much for your lovely.. read more
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

always
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

xo



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Under all the warning...I still see the plea of a desperate heart to be loved in spite of all the darkness within. A very touching write Frieda.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Oh did that already Divya....you know about being burnt so many times, you learn to stay away from t.. read more
Lyrics of TLC's "Damaged" run though my head while reading this one..

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Interesting interpretation Renee, thanks so much.
AMAINMG AMAZING SO gosh darn good.. VERY MOVING!!!! WOW

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thank you, thank you sweet Kelsey!
Lover Of Words

11 Years Ago

My pleasure :)
Such a moving piece of poetry. Your writings touch a depth in me that words can not describe. Keep up the good work - love your writings. I've missed reading them, but I'm trying to get caught up with everybody.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Have missed your presence here also Tarry, thanks so much for your kind review.
Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

My pleasure
A painful honesty of a heart that has been scorched... now in pain and fear it cowers... I know the taste of this horrific fire... the ashes it leaves behind. And I know that from the ashes can rise the Phoenix. xo

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Sorry to hear you've touched this flame, how many times can the Phoenix rise I wonder without exting.. read more
The 13th Eros

11 Years Ago

If you are the Phoenix of which we speak then I say a thousand times a thousand. Let no one tell you.. read more
Oh so you do come with a warning label :)

If we have not healed from a broken heart then we are not capable of giving to another fully.

Very well written.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

No, but that's an idea Dale, thanks so much!
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

Yes a very good idea ;)
as i read this, my heart cries for your tortured psyche...my eyes tear up for your bleeding soul and i would impart to you only the gentlest wishes for happiness, only the truest of all empathy and loving understanding. it seems the best and brightest of us sometimes have too many demons to quell their fears and anxieties and are richly deserving of so much better. this is a straight to the heart and deeply moving warning of your own idiosyncratic proclivities, self destructive and yet, all for self preservation. i love your gentle heart, frieda...it truly shines through in all your writes.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

'Idiosyncratic proclivities'....nice way to put it huckleberry quin...thanks so much for your lovely.. read more
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

always
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

xo

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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