as i read this, my heart cries for your tortured psyche...my eyes tear up for your bleeding soul and i would impart to you only the gentlest wishes for happiness, only the truest of all empathy and loving understanding. it seems the best and brightest of us sometimes have too many demons to quell their fears and anxieties and are richly deserving of so much better. this is a straight to the heart and deeply moving warning of your own idiosyncratic proclivities, self destructive and yet, all for self preservation. i love your gentle heart, frieda...it truly shines through in all your writes.
'Idiosyncratic proclivities'....nice way to put it huckleberry quin...thanks so much for your lovely.. read more'Idiosyncratic proclivities'....nice way to put it huckleberry quin...thanks so much for your lovely response, it truly touches my heart.
Under all the warning...I still see the plea of a desperate heart to be loved in spite of all the darkness within. A very touching write Frieda.
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Oh did that already Divya....you know about being burnt so many times, you learn to stay away from t.. read moreOh did that already Divya....you know about being burnt so many times, you learn to stay away from the flame. Thanks sweet friend.
Such a moving piece of poetry. Your writings touch a depth in me that words can not describe. Keep up the good work - love your writings. I've missed reading them, but I'm trying to get caught up with everybody.
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Have missed your presence here also Tarry, thanks so much for your kind review.
A painful honesty of a heart that has been scorched... now in pain and fear it cowers... I know the taste of this horrific fire... the ashes it leaves behind. And I know that from the ashes can rise the Phoenix. xo
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Sorry to hear you've touched this flame, how many times can the Phoenix rise I wonder without exting.. read moreSorry to hear you've touched this flame, how many times can the Phoenix rise I wonder without extinguishing itself in the interim? Thanks for your thoughts sweet Eros.
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If you are the Phoenix of which we speak then I say a thousand times a thousand. Let no one tell you.. read moreIf you are the Phoenix of which we speak then I say a thousand times a thousand. Let no one tell you otherwise. Rise... rise.. rise. xo
as i read this, my heart cries for your tortured psyche...my eyes tear up for your bleeding soul and i would impart to you only the gentlest wishes for happiness, only the truest of all empathy and loving understanding. it seems the best and brightest of us sometimes have too many demons to quell their fears and anxieties and are richly deserving of so much better. this is a straight to the heart and deeply moving warning of your own idiosyncratic proclivities, self destructive and yet, all for self preservation. i love your gentle heart, frieda...it truly shines through in all your writes.
'Idiosyncratic proclivities'....nice way to put it huckleberry quin...thanks so much for your lovely.. read more'Idiosyncratic proclivities'....nice way to put it huckleberry quin...thanks so much for your lovely response, it truly touches my heart.
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..