Stepping Out on the WC

Jungle beats

            of the heart

tango steps

             of the soul

         dancing the sweet melody

           of verse

poetry is like

               the call of the wild 

off key, low key,

    it's all the same to me

you can lead the way,

             I won't skip a beat

   waltz me to the end of time

tap dance 

 around nature's harmony

write an entire symphony

notes of rapture

lyrics that fandango

           frolic to love

dipped jazzy 

into fiery inferno's play

rocking music

 pounding in the loins

tap me on the shoulder,

 take me for a spin

 where the rhythm counts

 on the writer's cafe

   whip your hair

 to the beat frenzied 

 stanza's cadence

per chance,

             you hear

  passionate chords

Encore, take a bow....

Reviews

[quinfinn]

i don't know whether this is poetry or music, but i took off all my clothes and danced around the room, hmmm, something was missing, so i stuck some peacock feathers up my (belt) and danced some more...yep, it was the feathers! you make my pants want to get up and dance! i love to read your poetry, frieda...you make me feel alive!

[Frieda P]

Ha, sorry I missed it, glad you liked it quin, this was fun to write.

[lee von cleef]

Two step, cowboy or carpenter, they have hands,to rope you,build you, to lay in the balance of your back, to feel the passion of your cross, carried to pay your debt,men only human ,naturals to pick up the tab, we will all be prayed for at Easter.

[Frieda P]

All I need is poetry and some music, I'm fine. thanks for the read.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

musical serenity...letting go...lovely poem...

was a bit misled by the title because i thought it meant you were having an affair with another poetry site...

and would be wearing the Scarlet Letter.

[Frieda P]

Oh geez, is that what happens if you step out on the WC? ;-)
Thanks jacob...

[Ken Simm.]

Nice, thats the word, nice. Happy and tuneful.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Ken, happy you got the happy vibe...was writing and listening to music, two of my favs...glad you enjoyed it.

[AYVID N]

A standing ovation!
It was such fun to read. So briming with energy so full of zest!

Missing the spark that you bring to WC. Our time is not up yet. Where are you?

[Frieda P]

Wooo...now you made me feel better already! Thanks Divya :-)

[AYVID N]

You deserve it! :)

[Frieda P]

Love you! :-)

[AYVID N]

Love you too! :)

[Lover Of Words]

Well isnt this amazing

[Frieda P]

Well, aren't you? ;-)

[Lover Of Words]

Well are you more? ;-)

[Michael G.]

Very nice write. You have the style, skill, imagination, and grace. Well done.

[Frieda P]

Sweet review Michael, thanks so much.

[Jack...]

Nice

[Frieda P]

Thanks Jack.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

May I have the next dance... such a fun read, I could feel the beat move my feet.

[Frieda P]

But of course Dale, thanks.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Shall we Salsa or Rumba?

[Blue Lotus]

You had my soul dancing around the room frieda...
this afternoon you had me running out in sandels ..
and now dancing...
keep writing like this ...
and i will be looking great for the summer lol....
lovely poem naturally

[Frieda P]

Woo, sounds like a party Hanah, thank you!