Reawakening

Inspired by sweet Divya for dazzling me with her butterfly kisses.

If you listen

          attentively,

you can hear

          flowers blossom

the lovely sounds 

            of rebirth in spring zephyrs

scent of wildflowers

          in the cool night's air

inhale the new horizons

           of renewal

revive your senses,

                 indulge in sensation

         flutterby's will tickle your fancy

                    and ignite your glow

dawdle down the path 

                 of lazy hazy lovely views

 rejoice in the essence

                  of life's wonderment

Stop and pick a posy,

watch it grow

           count the gift of each petal

         gather the kindness of it's melody, 

pass it along 

               with your innermost song

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Jack...]

So tender and warm, like the spring day that you are Frieda. As I read your poems, I do count the gift of each petal. They are like beautiful blooms to me, their fragrance enchants me, their beauty lures me and their message grow forever with me. Frieda, you are a bloom and I am happy to count the gift of each and every petal you shed for us.

[Frieda P]

This is so lovely, it's like a bouquet of flowers in a review, I thank you kindly, and you know this means a lot coming from you, thanks Jack.

[Renée]

Soothing voice of a Poetess in spring ! Lovely Frieda !

[InsanityWriter]

Perfectly lovely. ;) Nicely done!!

[SkinlessFrank]

you're whetting my appetite....but for now there is snow all around and grey skies....thanks for the taste of it

[Jibey]

Such is the mystery of Spring's awakening, captured nicely here in the vitality of words

[Frieda P]

Thanks Jibey.

[Baby Ricochet]

Beautiful poem

[Frieda P]

Thanks Baby.

[Lover Of Words]

So beautiful!! wow.... Im out of words your work always leaves me searching for words!!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Kelsey.

[Lover Of Words]

It is my greatest pleasure

[s y e]

Aw, this is sweet and I can see that Divya likes it too!
You're such a wonderful friend to have, you're poetry is amazing!!

[Frieda P]

Awh you're too sweet, you're the best daughter a mama could ask for ;-)

[The 13th Eros]

This is a flight of fancy that reveals the sweetness of the soul; the delight of the light within. Would that I were a butterfly, fairest queen.

[Frieda P]

Ha queen, well that's much better than what Creeper calls me at least, thanks so much Eros...very kind review.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I'm truly delighted by this piece!....I'm ready for Spring!...ready for renewal, fresh breezes, wildflowers, butterflies, and sunshine! You nailed it Frieda...you have captured the "melody" of "the innermost song"...the heart song. Lovely write!

[Frieda P]

Thanks my lovely friend, so happy you enjoyed this one!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

You touched my heart with this piece...loved it!

[quinfinn]

i prefer not to pick that posy, but to let her flourish and grow. if i were to want her, i would bring her, unscathed, to an earthly garden where she would have the company of other lovely flowers and visits from hoards of beautiful butterflies...and constantly care for and nourish her with sunlight and all the nutrients she requires. you write such beautiful verse...i feel compelled to surround you with beauty in my reviews....thank you for sharing

[Frieda P]

You turn my head with your lovely reviews quin...I am practically swooning here. Thanks for your kindness and always being so supportive, you're the best dear friend.

[quinfinn]

as are you.....