Revived Genesis

Inspired by Ero's.

crossover with me,

 to the other side of ecstasy

we'll dance in fields

           of poppies and lilacs

butterflies and sweet doves

 sing songs of love

the key to heart's enchantment

 lies beyond the ridge

take the plunge

 and devour the scent of wildflowers

souls prance on zephyrs

               of resplendent sublime lined clouds 

 contentment floats

 above the purple majestic blazes,

it's warm, gooey goodness

 once you release

take your natural earthly desires

and zest without hesitation,

set it ablaze at the core

       of affection's unveiling

then sail on azure seas whilst

           we cross this bond on wings

take this ascend with me

                  to a new dawning

Author's Note

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Reviews

[AYVID N]

A lover's invitation to ecstasy, blissful beyond heavens....

Loved these lines -
"the key to heart's enchantment
lies beyond the ridge
take the plunge"

- The release, the plunge, is a prerequisite to experiencing true bliss in love. The crossover, the ascension demands it, and you brought this out beautifully here!

Thanks Frieda, for sharing this pretty write.

[Frieda P]

I'm really jazzing on your review Divya, thanks so much my dear sister. x

[AYVID N]

You are always welcome my dear one.

[Androglossia]

I know I was looking for the secret door but I have never imagined you would give in without delay, haha. And like the answer to my question, I would willingly ride the gentle breeze with you should you willfully show me the pinstripe weaving of your fantasy:) This write is next to heaven, Frieda. I would gladly drown myself in creations like this.

[Frieda P]

Woohoo, mission accomplished!

[quinfinn]

i have been to the other side of ecstasy. it is a real and beautiful place to journey to. yes, i know i ended that sentence with a preposition, deal with it. let's call it poetic license, which brings me to my point. frieda, your poetry is so sublime, so rich with fervor, so endearing and beautiful that i fear you may have to reclassify your license. you are shining like a celestial body with this write, yes, i will come with you to the other side of ecstasy, as a matter of fact, i just did. the only thing missing was that restraint which holds other writers back from real expression. reckless abandon is your poetic license, damn the torpedoes...full speed ahead! love your writes!

[Frieda P]

You know I love the word 'sublime' and every time I read one of your reviews, I fall more in love with you quin....not that I didn't already. ;-)

[Frieda P]

You want to get rid of me that fast?!

[Frieda P]

that wasn't nice............

[Frieda P]

put your lips together and BLOW

[Frieda P]

You're missing the point entirely ;-)

[Frieda P]

ftw are you doing?

[quinfinn]

showing respect....

[Holly Mason]

an inspiring write indeed
those poppies again I have to find you that darn recipe..
you take readers breath away with your writing amazing your mind
thank you for sharing

[Frieda P]

haha I know my poppy fetish...we have to work on that Holly.

[Ken Simm.]

This blows exactly like the breeze. The zephyr you mention. Across those meadows and through those trees. Excellent.

[Frieda P]

Your review blew me away on a zephyr Ken, thanks so much.

[The 13th Eros]

Yes, this is what you were meant for. Not the mundane trials of life... but the fullness of its passions. The sweet dance of ecstasy will release your fears, your stress, your pain. All that is left is this bliss you sing of here. Embrace your destiny, beautiful poet. xo

[Frieda P]

I do love to dance..you're too kind, thanks so much Eros.

[The 13th Eros]

Then it shall always be dancing in ecstasy for you. :)

[Rob Santana]

I like gooey goodness.....

[Frieda P]

Ha, is that all you have to say? ;-P