Revived Genesis

Inspired by Ero's.

crossover with me,

 to the other side of ecstasy

we'll dance in fields

           of poppies and lilacs

butterflies and sweet doves

 sing songs of love

the key to heart's enchantment

 lies beyond the ridge

take the plunge

 and devour the scent of wildflowers

souls prance on zephyrs

               of resplendent sublime lined clouds 

 contentment floats

 above the purple majestic blazes,

it's warm, gooey goodness

 once you release

take your natural earthly desires

and zest without hesitation,

set it ablaze at the core

       of affection's unveiling

then sail on azure seas whilst

           we cross this bond on wings

take this ascend with me

                  to a new dawning

Author's Note

captcha - redress

Reviews

[AYVID N]

A lover's invitation to ecstasy, blissful beyond heavens....

Loved these lines -
"the key to heart's enchantment
lies beyond the ridge
take the plunge"

- The release, the plunge, is a prerequisite to experiencing true bliss in love. The crossover, the ascension demands it, and you brought this out beautifully here!

Thanks Frieda, for sharing this pretty write.

[Frieda P]

I'm really jazzing on your review Divya, thanks so much my dear sister. x

[AYVID N]

You are always welcome my dear one.

[PP]

Redress I get it! Awesome little beautiful piece Frieda as always..love it x

[Frieda P]

ha, just thought I'd throw that in...thanks Tink!

[khalid]

very lovely...you look here like a farmer growing the seeds of hope in the deserts of lonely hurt hearts..i loved how you have penned this...(as usual)

[Frieda P]

and I always love your reviews, thanks khalid.

[khalid]

my reviews become more valuable when they are put under your poems..

[KeelyJane]

Beautifully worded. Great meter. Very magical read. Good job poet. :)

[Frieda P]

Oh, I like 'magical'...thanks so much Keely!

[Jibey]

Vigorous and zesty, this dance of delight is irresistible... inviting the celebration of earthly desires in a paradise of pleasure... 'warm, gooey goodness'... I think I get it... *smiles*

[Frieda P]

Ha, you're not the only one that likes that part, thanks Jibey!

[Deuces]

Pursuing love is half the battle. Finding another who is willing to go that extra mile and take the risk you're willing to take is another story. I enjoyed this as it seduces the object of affection into taking risk... the ascend to a new dawning. Beautiful.

[Frieda P]

'Risk' there's the key word right there, you smacked it with a sledge hammer...thanks so much Cyntax for your review.

[Deuces]

Always an enjoyable journey.

[N!LoC]

what is captcha - redress ?

[Frieda P]

you know the word you have to insert so they can determine if you're human or not,..beats me how they can tell with all the squirrel monkeys. ;-)

[Baby Ricochet]

Nice piece. It does read like the old Greek mythical characters frolicing in the forrest

[Frieda P]

I'm loving that interpretation Baby.

[Jack...]

Like a dream, I was swept away with your words. Lifted from my place by the warmest of breezes, soaring high above the world, gazing deep into the kaliedescope of tenderness and devotion. Very nice.

[Frieda P]

You give good review Jack, thanks!

[Ahmad Cox]

I truly flew and grew wings with this lovely poem as well. Wonderful job.

[Frieda P]

Wow Ahmad, that's so sweet, thanks.