Revived Genesis

Inspired by Ero's.

crossover with me,

 to the other side of ecstasy

we'll dance in fields

           of poppies and lilacs

butterflies and sweet doves

 sing songs of love

the key to heart's enchantment

 lies beyond the ridge

take the plunge

 and devour the scent of wildflowers

souls prance on zephyrs

               of resplendent sublime lined clouds 

 contentment floats

 above the purple majestic blazes,

it's warm, gooey goodness

 once you release

take your natural earthly desires

and zest without hesitation,

set it ablaze at the core

       of affection's unveiling

then sail on azure seas whilst

           we cross this bond on wings

take this ascend with me

                  to a new dawning

Author's Note

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Reviews

[AYVID N]

A lover's invitation to ecstasy, blissful beyond heavens....

Loved these lines -
"the key to heart's enchantment
lies beyond the ridge
take the plunge"

- The release, the plunge, is a prerequisite to experiencing true bliss in love. The crossover, the ascension demands it, and you brought this out beautifully here!

Thanks Frieda, for sharing this pretty write.

[Frieda P]

I'm really jazzing on your review Divya, thanks so much my dear sister. x

[AYVID N]

You are always welcome my dear one.

["writing by" KS]

"Butterflies and sweet doves,
sing songs of love"
this sent a shiver down my spine. Beautiful.wo derful write. Thank you .

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much KS, that was my favorite line...

[KAOlmsted]

I love the full-blown imagery in this piece...it's just...BAM...there's your poetry right there, b*****s! Excellent work here.

[Frieda P]

Holy cats! I'll take BAM, I know you're not a fan of the gooey crap, that speaks volumes ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

Yes, ma'am.

BAM!

:-D

[Frieda P]

Ha, doing the happy dance. :-)

[InsanityWriter]

Loved the imagery!! Great work! :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Skittles ;-)

[Claire Twinn]

Sounds like an amazing dance, I'd go for sure!
(I think there shouldn't be an apostrophe in seas!)

[Frieda P]

My Achilles heel! Thanks muchly Claire.

[Dr. Wood ?]

irresistible

[Frieda P]

thanks Dr. Wood, coming from you that's really sweet!

[Dr. Wood ?]

Ha ha.....Just an old sweetie , me

[Relic]

Gooey goodness, ahhh, yes. haha Well, when it comes to ecstacy I gave a bad review last time, so I'll just say I like this poem and the ideal world you put me in. Wanna have some foreplay with me? :D

[Frieda P]

Ha! ;-)

[Relic]

:)

[s y e]

Another wonderful poem from you Mama F! As always you got me speechless, that happens alot lately with you! Im getting worried! ;-P

Loved it!

[Frieda P]

Funny farfalle, you speechless could be a good thing. ;-)

[s y e]

Hahaha, I don't know about that! I always have something to say! :-O

[Frieda P]

My point exactly! ;-P

[s y e]

Haha. You're a cheeky Mama F

[Frieda P]

The apple doesn't fall far from the tree! ;-P

[s y e]

Hahahahha! ;-) Nice one

[Frieda P]

:-D

[s y e]

Don't I have a funny mama ;-P

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ok good but controlled words sans extacy!

[Frieda P]

Thanks John.

[kublakhan27]

This does indeed have a mythic feel to it...the landscape itself becomes a tool of seduction through these words ;)

[Frieda P]

Wooo, you're awake, love the review, thanks! ;-P

[kublakhan27]

Haha in a manner of speaking...my pleasure :)

[Sami Khalil]

take your natural earthly desires
and zest without hesitation,
set it ablaze at the core
of affection's unveiling
then sail on azure sea's .
This did it for me dear lady . Whoah .
Thank you for sharing those strong feelings with HIM or the readers ...:)
Another great write...

[Frieda P]

Woah, I love your review Sami...thanks so much ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...;}