RAGE Senryu

Pay close attention

don't be flippant in my face

'this too shall not pass'

Reviews

[s y e]

I swear you don't mess around, you get straight to the point!
Nicely written!

[Frieda P]

I'm Italiano and from joisey, what'd ya expect? That was the cleaned up version for public consumption! ;-P

[s y e]

Haha, ugh why'd you clean it up?! Crazy laaady!

[Frieda P]

I wrote it right after I got off the phone with above said person...it wasn't pretty! ;-P

[s y e]

aaaaaaah... say no more :P

[Lover Of Words]

This is well said... Get me everytime with these

[Frieda P]

Thanks Kelsey...

[Marie]

Very good...never give an inch...

[Frieda P]

Thanks Marie...I only do that with the minions...sometimes.

[Yellow Butterfly]

You definitely don't mince your words... that's why I'm a fan.... not the type that cools you down...

Just one of the army of admirers on WC of your wonderful work Frieda....

A senryu.... well said... :O)

[Frieda P]

Ha, love having your here friend, butterflies always welcome! Thanks so much...

[Coyote Poetry]

Direct and honest words. I like them. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Some cutting comments can only be responded to with direct. Thanks John.

[quinfinn]

it is one of those Ghandi thingies, i think.....like Namaste or Peace, or it'll all be okay...when someone tells me "it'll all be okay" and i know they are full of s**t...i want to slap the taste outta their mouth! nice rant....

[Frieda P]

I hear you, people should be forewarned I guess, that really pisses me off to no end I've heard it so often...just stfu!

[quinfinn]

oh, i remember the first and last time i uttered "this too shall pass" to you. i thought you were gonna reach thru my computer screen and rip my lips off and shove them up my a*s!

[Frieda P]

Ha, sorry about that!

[quinfinn]

i forgave you immediately, silly!

[Frieda P]

I know people don't know what to say sometimes, and it 'may' come from a good place, it just makes me snap....

[quinfinn]

i get that, believe me, i get those moments too....certain words or actions...you had better cut and run!

[Frieda P]

I guess we all have our own quirky triggers....

[Ken Simm.]

Would not dream of it Frieda. Or else I fear I would pass...... on perhaps.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Ken, I don't know who coined that phrase but it kills me....as if someone stepped on your toe, doesn't apply in most instances.

[Ken Simm.]

Speaking of which I think I must have stood on the Pope's corns in a past life. Its called Karma.

[Frieda P]

Ha, now that would get you a lot of nasty karma...I don't know if I believe in Karma...unless it only applies to good people.

[Jack...]

Oh, I'm sorry...were you saying something? I wasn't listening...huh...this poo shall not pass? Let me get a plunger.

Good job Frieda

[Frieda P]

Lol Jack...not funny! ;-P

[Emerald Seas]

Chuckling! I can think of a situation or two where this applies :)

[Frieda P]

Ha, I figured as much! ;-)

[Dr. Wood ?]

Please remind me never to get flippant with you......These few words speak volumes

[Frieda P]

ha, my bark is worse than my bite...only applies to narrow-minded people, you're not one of those, thanks for stopping by. ;-)

[Dr. Wood ?]

PHEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Frieda P]

Ha! You're funny........................