RAGE Senryu

Pay close attention

don't be flippant in my face

'this too shall not pass'

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

Hell hath no fury and all that jazz ;-)

[InsanityWriter]

Wow. Such short lines can say so much! Awesome expression of rage. ;)

[Baby Ricochet]

Hmm. Being flippant is my review trade mark. I should watch my cyber step

[Frieda P]

Now that made me laugh out loud, you're fine, I love your flippant remarks, you and Marie can get away with it!

[A. V. Madison]

Writing Mojo had it right, hell hath no fury like a woman scorned! Words to live by, my dearest Frieda. But through the distress came a wonderful senryu, didn't it? Perhaps not all is lost.

xoxo and well wishes,
~Mary Alice Victors

[...Relic...]

Good play on words through an emotional order. If only those who shoot up schools and buildings could channel their rage in such a creative way instead.

[writing mojo]

hell hath no furry like a woman poet scorn>>

[Frieda P]

Ha! ;-)

[Deron Alexis]

because women hold on to it forever why not do like men and end it in a volley of blood and guts

[Frieda P]

I'm seriously thinking along those lines Deron!

[Deron Alexis]

its a philosophy

[Frieda P]

Or a frame of mind put into motion....

[KeeD]

For nothing or no one can conqueror the stronghold of Frieda P's spirit. :) good stuff.

[Frieda P]

Nice to see your face again Kee!

[Renée]

strong & to the point

[Frieda P]

Thanks Renee.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

haha... you tell em young lady.

[Frieda P]

There you go again ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Opppps I did it again :p

[Frieda P]

Ha Britney, is that you?

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Darn my covers blown.