Crash Unto Me

“I want to gather your darkness in my hands, to cup it like water and drink.”  

Jane Hirshfield

The siren song is playing,

 will my persuasion tempt you

sway with me

 in the silvery strands of moonlight

let's do the dance of allure's enticement,

 I want to drink you til dawn

folded backbone into one another,

 let our essence mingle

you touch

 my natural woman's quintessence 

i'll embrace

 your manhood with divine release 

twirling, swirling delirium

feverish pitch

 in frenzied tempo's heat

swept away by you,

 my feet never touched the ground

extract from me what you need,

 my warmed silken glow,

i'll embrace

 your bold machismo till i'm worn

dance with tenancy and resolution

 till your guts are plucked raw

heart and soul's mettle will conquer our bodies,

 grab the spirit

sip gossamer fluids that from me freely flows,

 i'll inhale your madness

fractured blaze until the collapse,

 ruptured thunder within

lay me down next to your crash

 till our next interlude

Reviews

[Jibey]

A heady cocktail (lol) of sweat and sensuality, of quintessence flowing juicily and feverish grabbing and groping... The mad spirit was there all right (gin?) and I take it the guts plucked raw meant there were multiple orgasms lol

Sensational... to say the least... f*****g sensational :-)

[Frieda P]

If you say so Jibey ;-)

[s y e]

... Sᴘᴇᴇᴄʜʟᴇss ᴀɢᴀɪɴ....
Lɪᴋᴇ, I ᴅᴜɴɴᴏ ᴡʜᴀᴛ ʏᴏᴜ'ʀᴇ ᴅᴏɪɴɢ ᴛᴏ ᴍᴇ, I'ᴍ ᴀᴛ ʟᴏss ғᴏʀ ᴡᴏʀᴅs!!!

Aɴᴏᴛʜᴇʀ ᴡᴇʟʟ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ᴘᴏᴇᴍ!

[Frieda P]

Again? I'm missing my flip flops and all that jazz! ;-P

[s y e]

Ack! Stop talking piffle, your poetry is awesome! Has me speechless but still wacky!

[Frieda P]

What happened to your fancy font? ;-)

[s y e]

I cant be assed doing it again ;-P

[quinfinn]

so, you have piqued my interest. i am ready for this waltz. when can we have dinner? frieda, this not only challenges the best writers on this site, but it sings the body erotique for all to hear...this is sexy, gorgeous, sensual and tantric to the point of surrealism. i want to go outside and crow at the dawn or run to the woods and bark at the moon after reading this. superb, m'lady....just superb.

[Frieda P]

Wow, what a review quin, I'm humbled and so happy that you think so.

[Lover Of Words]

My my my what a lovely piece....

[Frieda P]

So glad you liked it Kelsey.

[kublakhan27]

My dear, where do I start with this? It went right to my library, I'll start with that ;P This is true ecstasy, this is the kind of connection every man hopes to make with a woman, on paper and in the flesh, and I'm assuming it's mutual as it was written by a woman haha ;P The mingling of essences...drink me, crash into me, let our essences mingle...I can't think of a better way to usher in the weekend ;)

[Frieda P]

Might I say, that your review blew me away, thanks so much Steve!

[kublakhan27]

Always my pleasure Frieda :)

[khalid]

wow..that is really wonderful..lol i feel the pc screen is going to burn because of the heat you have been radiating here..

[Frieda P]

ha that actually made me laugh out loud! ;-P Thanks khalid...

[khalid]

im happy it could put a smile on your face, you are welcome

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Had the feel of the Masters of poetry from 500 years ago. Great tale and you create good visions and the emotion were alive and strong. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Wow...love your review Coyote, thanks so much. I don't think I've read any poetry that is 500 years old.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Another steamy visceral piece of poetry.

[Frieda P]

Thanks John.

[Jack...]

Sensual and beautiful, tender and soft, and everything in between. very nice.

Sitting in my office at the body shop and seeing the title, "Crash unto me"...well, you know.

[Frieda P]

Lol Jack! Thanks so much...!