You Move Me

A very lovely woman I've met here sent me this photo, I was moved by it, read it as you wish.

Awe struck... 

        by the beauty of

        your light

       all the colors of passion

 swept me away

to a mystical place

 in my soul's sight

Fire and ice

 rapturous entanglements

weaving and staking

 its claim in space

I see the wonderment

     of a child's' laughter

The dignity of royalty,

 the fight for life,

tearful cries of joy

 and blissful encounters

a newborn life

   that explodes onto this earth

           crimson that connects

 our lifeblood and ardor

  Fierceness of a lioness 

         protecting her cubs

honesty and true blue

          dedication with fervor

majestic moutains

            of pride and grace

A safe place to rest

 the weary head at peace

  I see all these colors

          that shade your luster

it shapes my world

            glistens my hope 

     and moves my being

Reviews

[Angel of Heart's]

Only someone with a beautiful heart and spirit could have written this poem....You...your heart...and the words that you spill...Sometimes its hard to see the rainbow through dark glasses....such a tender piece that reaches into the depths....
I think this one is very telling and very well done......I thank you for the share....and for being so special....:)

[Frieda P]

That is quite a compliment coming from you Angel, one who writes such constant beauty in her work...thanks so much for this great review.

[David Scott]

It is good to see the "colors of anouther person's soul! Your one of those who make the eye happy to look upon.
Good job.

[Frieda P]

Whoa, I had no clue who you were, nice pic hun! Thanks...digging the hat btw. ;-)

[quinfinn]

somewhat of a departure for you, this speaks with grace and wisdom...aside from your light and fluffy pieces of late. i enjoyed this tremendously. when you get serious it introduces the reader to another part of your psyche. never stop changing and growing, my sweet. superb verse.

[Frieda P]

haha, a departure for me is grace and wisdom! geez, thanks my loving friend! ;-)

[Lover Of Words]

This is amazing beautiful

[Frieda P]

Thanks Kelsey.

[KAREN]

Beautifully done! I can envision it all!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much, that makes me smile.

[kublakhan27]

The first verse made me think of Two Tickets To Paradise haha A very pretty and uplifting piece though...a departure from your most common areas of introspection, which I would suggest are despair and dark humour...you also touch on romance from time to time, but this piece is different from all of those...it demonstrates your diversity ;)

[Frieda P]

I just don't pay you enough my friend....don't get used to it, there's plenty more dark coming. ;-) Thanks so much for this outstanding review!

[kublakhan27]

My pleasure Frieda :) Haha I don't doubt it...that is your natural element after all, as it is mine...at least I think it is, you tell me ;P

[Frieda P]

ha Birds of a feather my love! ;-)

[kublakhan27]

Haha and that is all I need to know ;)

[Frieda P]

:-D

[Rob Santana]

This is a really nice poem. This is one of your calm pieces, haha. That pic is really cool, reminds me of what I see after smoking a super doobie!!!

[Frieda P]

I adore your sicko reviews!!

[Jack...]

Now how weird is this, these were my exact thoughts, word for word when I first saw you photograph...weird huh?

beautiful Frieda

[Frieda P]

I could have sworn I replied to this, and that doesn't surprise me. We have different styles but know what we like...thanks so much Jack.

[Holly Mason]

so lovely, gives the feeling that you will protect all beings ,that we all matter to you
so many colors..what a beautiful world we live in
thank you for sharing

[Frieda P]

I adore your interpretation Holly! Thanks so much.

[Holly Mason]

you are very welcome...and if you didn't read my sleep time help for you-skip the drink go right for the Poppy chasing the dragon should wear you out!*)

[Frieda P]

Not exactly sure what that is, but it sounds illegal! ;-)

[Holly Mason]

Jaeger but without the liquid...not in U.S. anymore but originaly jaeger had opium in it-now that is only offered over seas -dang trade laws*)

[Frieda P]

Can I order it on e-bay or Amazon? ;-)

[Holly Mason]

I would think any military base grocery would sport such a libation on it's shelves..grab a soldier and head on over hahah*)

[Frieda P]

Ha if only! ;-)

[Frieda P]

When my mother was a baby she had colic and my grandmother used to feed her poppy's, one time she went overboard and my mother slept for 3 days, freaked my grandmother out, she thought she'd killed her...I need that recipe!

[Holly Mason]

youtube it has everything*)

[Frieda P]

I can't find it on youtube...any other suggestions? ;-)

[Holly Mason]

college kids...they can cook anything but food hahahha