Feast On

You want to feast of me,

         rip my flesh from the bone

overflow my cup with

                 crimson wine and plumage

Submerge into my engorgement

       of swollen flood banks,

plethora of salty seas

 scalding my burning release

Lay me down,

  I will deluge your appetite,

drown in the salaciousness

 of ravenous Eros

your devotion to  gluttony

is my hunger replete 

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

Is it weird that I do this sort of affectation of my inner voice when I read pieces like this from you that sounds rather much like a lustful Victorian heaving bosom and breathless shouting woman on the verge of multiple O? Yeah, I didn't think so, either ;-)

Quick note...maybe "of" wants to be "on" in the first line? Or perhaps throw a "make" in there?

Breathlessly heaving my bosom here...just saying ;-)

[Frieda P]

You don't know hoe it thrills me that I could so move that awesome rack of yours! Just saying. ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

xD You are my whole entire heart...





...just saying ;-)

[Frieda P]

Holy cats, I love you! ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

Holy cats! I love you, too...so...you wanna hug it out or...are we good. xD

[Frieda P]

Consider yourself squishy hugged xD

[KAOlmsted]

;-)

[Frieda P]

Btw, holy cats is my new catch phrase, thank you very much ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

YES!!!! *fist pump*

[Ashly Christen]

ooooo very intriguing, I like :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks for the read Ashly. Much appreciated.

[Ashly Christen]

much welcome :)

[Chaos_Collector]

Passion is simply dropping from this poem. I love the detail you've incorporated in this poem Frieda! Well done!

[Frieda P]

Thanks Chaos, and I love your review.

[Chaos_Collector]

You're welcome :)

[AYVID N]

I agree with Baby. The poem is full of rivetting ravishing passion. The phrase "eating alive" comes out in all its colors. Thanks for writing and sharing this Frieda. Sexy to the core!

[Frieda P]

Thanks sis, you got it.

[Baby Ricochet]

Man! I'm hungry now, or is it horny? No I'm horny all the time, it must be hungry. Wait a second. Loved the poem. That was it!!

[Frieda P]

Ha now you confused me even. Thanks BR.

[kublakhan27]

On a hot summer night, will you offer your throat to the wolf with the red roses? ;P

[quinfinn]

will he offer me his hunger? will he offer me his lust? and will he starve without me? i bet you say that to all the boys!

[Frieda P]

You took the words right out of my mouth!...you two are a whole lot of meatloaf to handle!!

[quinfinn]

musta been while you were kissing me

[kublakhan27]

LOL Yeah you know me ;D

[kublakhan27]

Both of you, that is haha

[Frieda P]

Both of us what? I need to know before I commit to this one... ;-P

[quinfinn]

speaking of you and i.....

[Frieda P]

I'm lost, if you're not speaking sarcasm or Cohen, I have no clue what you mean! ;-P

[kublakhan27]

Both of you know me haha

[kublakhan27]

Haha wow I guess I need to work on my speaking skills ;P

[Frieda P]

I think it's all quin's fault. ;-)

[kublakhan27]

I didn't say it Quin, she did LOL ;P

[Kaylor Mason]

Cannibalism never felt so good . . .

[Frieda P]

And you would know, how?

[Kaylor Mason]

Only one way for you to find out ;)

[quinfinn]

this is insanely delicious. i feel as if i just had a four course meal and all i can think of now is...what's for desert? i love everything on your menu.

[Frieda P]

Dessert is a sweet rerun. ;-)

[quinfinn]

well then, play it again, Sam

[Lover Of Words]

This is very good nice job as always

[Frieda P]

Thanks Kelsey.

[The 13th Eros]

Finally, someone I can sink my teeth into! And not to worry; I'll bring plenty of wine and roses. ;)

[Frieda P]

You're a quick study. ;-)
Thanks so much.

[The 13th Eros]

It's years of trial and error. Thanks for being such a good teacher! ;)

[Jack...]

I just ate lunch and now I am hungry again, in fact, I'm starving. I'd like an order of Ravenous Eros to go please.

Frieda, your poetry makes my eyes yearn and my heart plead, I find myself clawing at the screen when I read. Very delicious.

[Frieda P]

Imagine that would sell like hotcakes on a menu! Your words thrill me Jack...thanks so much, you have no idea.