Bodacious Scones

         Will you share your scones with me

                after you've cracked the code

drip the honey cream

 in dollops upon

                   appetite's hunger

 to be quenched

fed from the spine

               of lofty lovebirds

interludes drenched

            in cherry extracts 

Could we just dally in

               lime gardens paramour of sin

naught to pack baggage

              or a suit of armor,

 sublime in the grassy

                   knolls of capriciousness

          Let bubbles trifle of moira

          & past grievances

   waft to kingdom come

take a snippet

 of poppy seeds delight 

       rummage through the frogs legs

Turn the key, to deliver

 cries of sirens and baby's

           yearning for mother's pearls

              

curdled in the breast 

             of heat we've given up 

         the voice of lucidity's warmth

Fever strums the soul strings 

with antidotes

 of lemon cubes and vodka

desire and assumptions

 cross the ferry

       with oars of apprehension

Splendor in the glass 

of nostalgia's moon

           whilst a butterfly spins

      seascapes prospects squeak 

            a certainty of designs

 starved with sanguine hunger

           The sting buoyant with stickiness 

         uncomfortable marmalade 

                     and bloodshed

press a balm

 unto the heart unenthusiastic

            with crayola's choice of blue

Brazen the audaciousness

 of bodacious

  slay the song within 

                  whet the whistle 

          of aching tresses grace

seize arrested heartbeats 

               license felicity to  prevail 

Reviews

[quinfinn]

i am so confused, my intellect is not functioning at present....i know there's a message in here but it eludes me. i had too much to dream last night and i'm suffering from cranium flatulation today. this still gets a very high points score because i know what a terrific writer you are, but i honestly didn't have a clue what the f**k you were trying to say.

[Frieda P]

OMFG I haven't laughed so hard in..I can't remember when! ha....listen, I'm shocked when you DO understand most of my stuff to be honest....hahahaha still cracking up here....!

[quinfinn]

funny thing is, hon, i usually DO get you!

[Frieda P]

Seriously hon, it was so worth it, I'm still laughing my a*s off!

[Frieda P]

You know I'm going to think of this the rest of the day and burst out laughing...

[quinfinn]

i do remember eating scones with orange marmalade when i was younger, living in England...but i got nothin' else.....oi vey

[Frieda P]

STOP you're killing me...........!

[quinfinn]

well , if you had said bodacious stones, i would have assumed it was about me...but no cigar!

[Frieda P]

hahahahaha, you are a tonic, I swear! Now I'm starting to worry since it makes perfect sense to me...I need to find a new shrink!

[quinfinn]

ah, pffft! no worries hon, you are fine! just your wild imagination running full tilt boogie. we all have our eccentricities.....

[Frieda P]

Sure, sure, now try to calm the insane woman..............................

[Frieda P]

If you don't get it, fat chance of anyone else having a clue!

[quinfinn]

shall i pour you a double dirty vodka martini and massage your feet? we can talk about whatever you like.

[Frieda P]

Ha sure first you beat me up, and now you wanna make nice..........

[quinfinn]

yeh, but when i make nice i make soooooo nice!

[Frieda P]

Holy crap, you made the Featured Review..I give up~!

[quinfinn]

what the hell are you talking about? how do i see this thingy you speak of?

[KAOlmsted]

...again with the frogs ;-)

I'm with quin on this one...what he said. xD

[Frieda P]

OMG don't get me started again, I'm still laughing my arse off from last time..the scones are kept right next to the box of frogs...what's your problem? ;-P

[KAOlmsted]

*laugh* I love box of frogs seeing as I am ;-) Scones remind me of Seattle. You couldn't throw something without hitting a damn scone in Seattle.

[Frieda P]

I'm just happy you didn't say Baltimore. ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

HA! When I lived in Hartford, we used to drive to Baltimore on the weekends...funny, I don't remember it being known for scones...

[Frieda P]

hahaha I wasn't thinking 'scones' ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

xD

[Frieda P]

Btw, what...you don't think scones are sexy? ;-P

[KAOlmsted]

Well, they are quite dense, which is a predominantly male trait, and I do love men so...sure...they're sexy as hell ;-)

[Frieda P]

Lol!! I love the way your mind works!

[KAOlmsted]

ditto sistah ;-)

[Frieda P]

If you were a scone you'd be bodacious, just saying ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

xD I couldn't love you more!

[Coyote Poetry]

Artwork and poetry was amazing. Take talent to write erotic with a tender touch. I like the flow of the poem and the positive ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

I'm just happy you understood it John. Like with 'a tender touch' thanks so much.

[AYVID N]

There is a lot emotion dipped in tasty delicious imagery here Frieda!
My compliments on the imaginative piece! :)
Loved reading it!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Divya, glad you enjoyed it.

[Jibey]

a banquet of sensual delicacies and fattening fleshly feasting...sticky words that ease the aching, a license to felicity and potential arrest!

what a word cook you are! you fill me nicely

[Frieda P]

ha 'fattening fleshly feasting', say that 3x's fast, I like it, thanks!

[kublakhan27]

I'm concerned for the welfare of your muse Frieda...I think it's been attacked by Allen Ginsberg...

[Frieda P]

LOL sexual repression? ;-P

[kublakhan27]

LOL No, that would be me ;P

[Frieda P]

HA, what the F are you trying to say then, spit it out! ;-)

[kublakhan27]

Haha I'm too busy reveling in your words to formulate my own ;)

[Frieda P]

LOL sweet talker are we? ;-P

[kublakhan27]

LOL Nah, merely a sweet reader ;)

[Frieda P]

ha, could use more of those any day....

[kublakhan27]

;P

[Kaylor Mason]

Who the hell lives like this?

[Frieda P]

What the hell does that even mean? You don't like scones I take it.....

[Kaylor Mason]

I mean . . . all these fantasies and stuff . . . every time I read them it's like going to some alien planet. real people don't act like this, don't live like this

[Kaylor Mason]

oh heck, never mind. maybe I'm just having a bad day. sorry

[Frieda P]

You take everything too literally, read between the lines...and get some shut eye! ;-)

[writing mojo]

"The sting buoyant with stickiness uncomfortable marmalade and bloodshed
press a balm unto the heart unenthusiastic with crayola's choice of blue" sounds like your taking word choice, and word color to a whole new level, that's good to keep the challenge presence in the form, and this styles in it's bone sod foundation does just that; a reading grounded by hypnotism and never by choice...great piece

[Frieda P]

'bone sod foundation' I like that! Thanks mojo.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The poem surprised me in a great way... you really mixed sexiness with intellect... so I was stimulated in both heads basically.

[Frieda P]

ROFLMAO!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Get up young lady before you get dirty :)

[LA Lorena]

pffft! far too late for that! ;)

[Frieda P]

Oh gawd not you!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Way to go Lorena, YES!!

[Frieda P]

ha, she's relentless!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

She is getting you back for that comment on her photo :)

[Frieda P]

Geez I told her she looked like she's in her 30's is that a bad thing? ;-)

[Annabelle Lee]

What a vast vocabulary.

[Frieda P]

You mean you're not hungry?

[Annabelle Lee]

not at the moment, no haha

[Frieda P]

HA!