Star Crazy

Artwork by *Star*

When I wish upon a star

I know exactly 

         which one you are

      swung up high

 with sheer delight

your aura 

   is the brightest of night

Your essence flows

                      like poppies in bloom

              your scent fills the room

                 like exotic perfume

my love will blossom

          by your mere sight

            my spirit soars regally

            igniting fiery flight

        the thoughts

       of your incandescent touch

      thrills me to delirium

                and ardor like nonesuch

Let me play in your fields

              of fantastical brilliance

         I want to live, 

                breathe,

                  be captured in

                      exquisite moon trance

Author's Note

Another stunning painting by my Starry fine friend, I wrote this to accompany it. ♥♥

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

It is a star as this that shines the brightest through the darkest of night!! A beautiful tribute to your dear and precious friend!! Her artwork is always perfection, as is your writing Sweet Frieda!!
Her light shines for all of us because of you!!!

[Frieda P]

You're so sweet to say Shelia, she loves to hear the comments here and I'm sure she'll love this one very much, thanks kindly dear friend.

[AYVID N]

A beautiful tribute to that someone who comes along and lights up our darkest night. They become our star, to love us, lead us and show us the light. Amzing how the love shines through every line!

A favourite for me. Thanks for writing this one. Reinforces my faith in love.

[Frieda P]

Wow Divya thanks for the great review, much appreciated, I'll let Star know too, she'll be so happy.

[Relic]

As an overview, you certainly are one of the most inventive and prolific poets here on WC. You spill out good poems as often as a car factory spills out the newest models. :) Being pictures are often good sources of ideas when it comes to writing poetry, you have
definitely given merit to this beautiful painting.

Your affectionate tone adds to the angelic characterization of the one being spoken about and your word choice stings along a theme that sours gracefully within the heavenly reflection of your own being. This is a great poem to add to your portfolio of poetry and I approve your efforts as well as the artist of the painting.

Great job Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Wow Relic, I am truly moved by your review, I don't know what to say, thank you so much....I will let her know also, appreciate it.

[Relic]

You're both quite welcome. :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Nice poem. Made me think of the night sky over the Syrian desert. (Iraq) I'd never seen so many stars in my life.

[Frieda P]

I can only imagine, reminds me of when I was in Canada, I never saw so many stars, thanks Baby.

[Emerald Seas]

Really beautiful, Frieda. Love the last four lines :)

[Frieda P]

Not really great at rhyming but when my friend painted this and asked for a poem to go with it, I know that's what she prefers. I'm not really sure how anyone cranks out piece after piece that rhymes but sounds so beautiful...what I meant to say is thanks. ;-)

[Emerald Seas]

You're welcome. Shoot, I can't bring myself to write every day anymore so, whatever works for each of us! Some have more time, some have less.

[Lover Of Words]

Your words with these words match the beauty of the art love job

[Frieda P]

Thanks Kelsey, she's really talented, I wrote this for her really.

[Lover Of Words]

Well you are talented with your words! Nice job