It is a star as this that shines the brightest through the darkest of night!! A beautiful tribute to your dear and precious friend!! Her artwork is always perfection, as is your writing Sweet Frieda!!
Her light shines for all of us because of you!!!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
You're so sweet to say Shelia, she loves to hear the comments here and I'm sure she'll love this one.. read moreYou're so sweet to say Shelia, she loves to hear the comments here and I'm sure she'll love this one very much, thanks kindly dear friend.
A beautiful tribute to that someone who comes along and lights up our darkest night. They become our star, to love us, lead us and show us the light. Amzing how the love shines through every line!
A favourite for me. Thanks for writing this one. Reinforces my faith in love.
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11 Years Ago
Wow Divya thanks for the great review, much appreciated, I'll let Star know too, she'll be so happy... read moreWow Divya thanks for the great review, much appreciated, I'll let Star know too, she'll be so happy.
As an overview, you certainly are one of the most inventive and prolific poets here on WC. You spill out good poems as often as a car factory spills out the newest models. :) Being pictures are often good sources of ideas when it comes to writing poetry, you have
definitely given merit to this beautiful painting.
Your affectionate tone adds to the angelic characterization of the one being spoken about and your word choice stings along a theme that sours gracefully within the heavenly reflection of your own being. This is a great poem to add to your portfolio of poetry and I approve your efforts as well as the artist of the painting.
Great job Frieda.
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11 Years Ago
Wow Relic, I am truly moved by your review, I don't know what to say, thank you so much....I will le.. read moreWow Relic, I am truly moved by your review, I don't know what to say, thank you so much....I will let her know also, appreciate it.
Really beautiful, Frieda. Love the last four lines :)
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11 Years Ago
Not really great at rhyming but when my friend painted this and asked for a poem to go with it, I kn.. read moreNot really great at rhyming but when my friend painted this and asked for a poem to go with it, I know that's what she prefers. I'm not really sure how anyone cranks out piece after piece that rhymes but sounds so beautiful...what I meant to say is thanks. ;-)
11 Years Ago
You're welcome. Shoot, I can't bring myself to write every day anymore so, whatever works for each o.. read moreYou're welcome. Shoot, I can't bring myself to write every day anymore so, whatever works for each of us! Some have more time, some have less.
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..