Star Crazy

Artwork by *Star*

When I wish upon a star

I know exactly 

         which one you are

      swung up high

 with sheer delight

your aura 

   is the brightest of night

Your essence flows

                      like poppies in bloom

              your scent fills the room

                 like exotic perfume

my love will blossom

          by your mere sight

            my spirit soars regally

            igniting fiery flight

        the thoughts

       of your incandescent touch

      thrills me to delirium

                and ardor like nonesuch

Let me play in your fields

              of fantastical brilliance

         I want to live, 

                breathe,

                  be captured in

                      exquisite moon trance

Author's Note

Another stunning painting by my Starry fine friend, I wrote this to accompany it. ♥♥

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

It is a star as this that shines the brightest through the darkest of night!! A beautiful tribute to your dear and precious friend!! Her artwork is always perfection, as is your writing Sweet Frieda!!
Her light shines for all of us because of you!!!

[Frieda P]

You're so sweet to say Shelia, she loves to hear the comments here and I'm sure she'll love this one very much, thanks kindly dear friend.

[Androglossia]

This is brilliant. Love and appreciation expressed beyond simplicity. There are millions of stars in the sky but there is only a few of them we significantly notice every night:) And the art is awesome.

[Frieda P]

Sorry, don't know how I missed this one, will rely that message to the artist, and thanks so much for your great review Maryanne!

[KAOlmsted]

I love your works that are inspired by Star's art...they are among some of my favorites. You accompany one another beautifully, brilliantly.

[Frieda P]

Her beautiful artwork is awe inspiring as she is, she's one of the strongest women I know...thanks so much the kimmer.

[KAOlmsted]

She, and you, are a triumph...

[Angel of Heart's]

How amazing to be filled with such inspiration by a beautiful work of art....your words simply slip seamlessly down the page...each one crafted with your own special golden brocade :)

[Frieda P]

Oooo, 'golden brocade' like that one a lot, thanks so much Angel ;-)

[InsanityWriter]

Beautiful combination. :) Both your poem and the picture are superb. ;)

[Frieda P]

Thanks again Skittles, I 'll be sure to let Star know too... ;-)

[PP]

Love how the whole thing flows so effortlessly..stunningly beautiful piece Frieda :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Tink! ;-)

[PP]

my pleasure my darling :)

[Michael G.]

Sweet feel to this. A Mother Nature Lullaby almost with your rhyme and flow.
Another pretty awesome pic, also. While this accompanies the picture well, it also could stand alone without it... on its own merit.

[Frieda P]

Thanks for that lovely review Michael, much appreciated.

[Annabelle Lee]

i caught some rhymes in there and had to make sure this ws fried.... this was new.... i liked it

[Frieda P]

I'm a terrible rhymer, doesn't flow well for me, glad you enjoyed this Annabelle.

[s y e]

This was lovely, a beautiful poem for a beautiful painting and a wonderfully talented person. Nicely written Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Farfalle, she's wildly talented, not hard to write something inspired to her lovey work.

[s y e]

She is talented for sure! And you're talented too!

[C.C. Marx]

I think your poem did that painting justice, peaceful in a way. A lullaby kinda.....

[Frieda P]

I love the thought of that, a lullaby, thanks C....

[C.C. Marx]

No problemo I call it like I see it