LIES and Random Trysts

Lies and random trysts

make up the composition

 of your heart

where there should be blue blood, 

there is fiery ice

it pumps into my vertebrae 

until I scream to be extricated

bound by gold and written oath

there is no deliminator so evil 

champion your best 

to honcho that sapling

curled around your fingers

 like an electric eel on prozac

soon you'll be filed in the basket 

of services rendered

your casket covering, 

a grey smut of dandelions expired

final call will be the sound

 of laughter scabbard all

doubleback is fair play, 

switch the blade to reflect the light

Author's Note

No lie...captcha - deviancy!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You are a amazing writer. So many lines stood out in the poem.
"Lies and random trysts
make up the composition
of your heart"
You had me from the lead line and I wanted more. Sometime we accept lied to know some kind of peace. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

I am truly humbled by your review Coyote, glad you enjoyed this one. Thanks so much.

[LA Lorena]

yup, what goes around comes round, and bites you in the a*s big time. I see someone else here is all fuzzy warm and a'glow with the valentine's day spirit! ;)

[Frieda P]

Ha yes, such fond memories to keep me all warm and fuzzy! :-) Enjoy your day!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

What a sharp ending, pun intended... what comes around goes around... some really creative analogies... I dated a lady years ago much like this.

[Frieda P]

Poor you, sorry, no one should have to deal with that. Thanks Dale, the upcoming annoying holiday made me think of it! ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you, no worries, long time ago... you are right no one should go through this. So if you did I am sorry. Yeah this holiday sucks when you don't have someone to share it with.

[Frieda P]

Even when I was with someone I wasn't big on it, it's a Hallmark holiday...I don't need someone else telling me to show my love and appreciation.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I know it is a hallmark holiday but to me it was fun :) I am a hopeless romantic.

[Frieda P]

Aweeeee ♥♥♥♥

[Frieda P]

Wow Frieda, I dwelled in this, this is sheer perfection.
"where there should be blue blood,
there is fiery ice
it pumps into my vertebrae
until I scream to be extricated
bound by gold and written oath"

made me go deeper... you're such a wordsmith of
delicate words, m'dear lady!

- Elisa

[Frieda P]

I am truly humbled by your review hon, thanks so much, glad to see you back! xo

Me too! :) I had good news this night, (about the hospital) so that gives me more energy here) :D your style is sublime, and unique, I will come back for more sister XX

[Annabelle Lee]

get it! haha

[Frieda P]

T wasn't funny....thanks.

[Annabelle Lee]

i ws laughing at myself... the "get it" was me being sarcastic..... sorry it wasnt clearer. I should have said 'get em' or something that needn't an explanation.

[Frieda P]

No need to apologize Annabellie, my sarcasm meter must have been off kilter!

[s y e]

Woah.... im kinda speechless in a way....

"it pumps into my vertebrae
until I scream to be extricated
bound by gold and written oath"

Wow, powerful lines there Mama F! :O I like it! As always, in my favorites!

[Frieda P]

Love it when you're speechless ;-)

[s y e]

Hahahaah :-O Cheeky mama!

[Frieda P]

Ha so far I've been called a cheeky monkey, cheeky cow, but never a cheeky mama! ;-P

[s y e]

Haha, cheeky mama xP Fookin awesome!

[Frieda P]

Hahaha fookin, you crack me up!

[s y e]

Hahaha, thats why lurve me!

[Frieda P]

Actually it's your hair, that noodlehead did it!

[s y e]

Ugh, thought is was me!

[kublakhan27]

"Everybody knows you've been discreet
but there were so many people you just had to meet
without your clothes
...and everybody knows"

An electric eel on prozac? Yowza...

[Frieda P]

I always have to refrain myself from saying exactly what I'm feeling when you respond, but you know.... ;-)

[kublakhan27]

You mean I didn't make you faint this time? I hope I'm not losing my edge ;)

[Frieda P]

Yes, but I'm at work and last time someone tried to resuscitate me, so....I'm trying to breathe ;-)

[kublakhan27]

You breathe in you breathe out, breathe in breathe out, breathe in breathe out, breathe in breathe out...and you're HIIIIIIGH as a cloud -Van Morrison ;)

[Frieda P]

Oh brother, you really know how to hurt a girl dontcha? ;-P He's next in line...............!

[kublakhan27]

*Taps left temple* I got all the lines my friend...they're just not mine haha ;P

[Frieda P]

Just don't start singing Brown Eyed Girl cause I lose it big time!

[kublakhan27]

Haha no, I'm an Astral Weeks guy ;P

[Frieda P]

Yeah okay, can't hold a candle to Have I Told You Lately or And It Stoned Me

[kublakhan27]

True, though you'll also find Moondance in that era, and who doesn't like that? ;)

[Frieda P]

That goes without saying....geez

[kublakhan27]

Of course haha

[Frieda P]

I think that's when i fell in love w/his music...the oldies are the best.

[kublakhan27]

Oh yes, Captain Obvious will tell you that the oldies are all I know haha

[Frieda P]

You're just an old soul Steve....

[kublakhan27]

Yup, that would be me ;P

[Jack...]

And you can send me dead flowers every morning
Send me dead flower by the mail
Send me dead flowers to my wedding
And I won't forget to put roses on your grave

Frieda, you do amaze me, this was pointed and hard and beautful and flowing. I don't know how you do it.

bound by gold and written oath
there is no deliminator so evil


And no poetress as good.

[Frieda P]

Holy, seriously don't know how to reply to that one, I'm humbled by a poet so fertile and poignant as yourself and being amongst so many talented people
here, you knocked me over with that one, truly Jack...thank you so much..

[luviva]

ohh my sweet frieda been long since i last passed and am sorry..
but hey what a great piece to wake up on! you got the vocabulary going and not to lie to you i had to look up half of their meanings. and it is a great write with such sacarsm loved this bit best " soon you will be filed in the basket of services rendred". cant stop laughing and hey, them lying bulls deserved it!

[Frieda P]

It's always good to see you, and so glad you enjoyed that line! ;-)

[David Scott]

"a grey smut of dnadeliions expired". This was my favorite line. "switch the blade" indeed. A cutting poem! Does truth always have to hurt? Good job.

[Frieda P]

Depends on what that truth is I suppose quin, funny you say that about the dandelions, I tried to order 'dead' flowers once to be sent as joke and you know the florist wouldn't send them? ha....thanks

[David Scott]

Not quin dear... thats ok. He is fine to be confused with. ha

[quinfinn]

i didn't do it, whatever it was

[Lover Of Words]

I like this one even though i dont understand what some of the words meant but still great as always :)