LIES and Random Trysts

LIES and Random Trysts

A Poem by Frieda P

Lies and random trysts
make up the composition
 of your heart
where there should be blue blood, 
there is fiery ice
it pumps into my vertebrae 
until I scream to be extricated
bound by gold and written oath
there is no deliminator so evil 
champion your best 
to honcho that sapling
curled around your fingers
 like an electric eel on prozac
soon you'll be filed in the basket 
of services rendered
your casket covering, 
a grey smut of dandelions expired
final call will be the sound
 of laughter scabbard all
doubleback is fair play, 
switch the blade to reflect the light


© 2013 Frieda P


Author's Note

Frieda P
No lie...captcha - deviancy!

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You are a amazing writer. So many lines stood out in the poem.
"Lies and random trysts
make up the composition
of your heart"
You had me from the lead line and I wanted more. Sometime we accept lied to know some kind of peace. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I am truly humbled by your review Coyote, glad you enjoyed this one. Thanks so much.



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Vey interesting. ;) Nicely done. ^_^

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Skittles ;-)
Like an electric eel on Prozac?? xD That is classic. Why the hell do you not drop everything and get your a*s down to Florida...oh wait...there is no way My Brit is ready for THAT *laugh*

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

OMG how did I miss this one? Darn WC...i would have been there already!
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

xoxo
You are a amazing writer. So many lines stood out in the poem.
"Lies and random trysts
make up the composition
of your heart"
You had me from the lead line and I wanted more. Sometime we accept lied to know some kind of peace. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I am truly humbled by your review Coyote, glad you enjoyed this one. Thanks so much.
I'm glad this isn't pointed my way.
Let's not forget, there are bastardettes, also... with no heart at all.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

That goes without saying Michael, but that's not my story....thanks for the read.
Why do I feel like finding and ripping said man to shreds???!!!! I love your voice dear sister, my new love! lol
Your voice is strong. It bites as it jumps off the page and let me say purge away!
Others may be jealous as I read and read my dear Frieda today.....
Much love.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much, that means a lot to me, lovely sister. Ha and please do, be my guest by all means!!.. read more
Priscilla Sayers

11 Years Ago

Of course I will! You must know I am most eager to hear your voice my friend;)
Like an electric eel on prozac--I really adore that line!

(By the way, do you ever get annoyed by all these captchas we have to do? Like when we save a piece of work up here? For me they're dang inconvenient--we never needed them)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha I kind of like that one myself. I always make sure my work is saved beforehand, I've lost stuff t.. read more
Kaylor Mason

11 Years Ago

good point
Cool.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Baby.
What goes around comes around, I knew someone like this, Guy wasn't worth two cents. He had a cheating heart written all over him. Don't know why I put up with his crap. I guess we live and learn. Karma will bite him in the end one day and I truly hope I am around to see it happen. Liked this write, it burns with style!!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks kaykay, not sure I believe in karma to be quite frank, they seem to get away with this sort o.. read more
Too many lying cheating b******s in this world, oh and valentines sux. :-P Another awesomely expressed write Frieda.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

That's what she said. ;-P
Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Haha :-p
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

:-D
I was simply blown away by this,

"Lies and random trysts
make up the composition
of your heart"

It so truly describes a cheat!
I hope you put that double-edged blade to good use and SOON! ;)

Simply Superb Frieda! Hugs!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AYVID N

11 Years Ago

Oh yesss!!! They do and more! They know I could disembowel them and their wife and have their sorry .. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

OMG LMAO!! ;-)
AYVID N

11 Years Ago

:)))))

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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