LIES and Random Trysts

Lies and random trysts

make up the composition

 of your heart

where there should be blue blood, 

there is fiery ice

it pumps into my vertebrae 

until I scream to be extricated

bound by gold and written oath

there is no deliminator so evil 

champion your best 

to honcho that sapling

curled around your fingers

 like an electric eel on prozac

soon you'll be filed in the basket 

of services rendered

your casket covering, 

a grey smut of dandelions expired

final call will be the sound

 of laughter scabbard all

doubleback is fair play, 

switch the blade to reflect the light

Author's Note

No lie...captcha - deviancy!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You are a amazing writer. So many lines stood out in the poem.
"Lies and random trysts
make up the composition
of your heart"
You had me from the lead line and I wanted more. Sometime we accept lied to know some kind of peace. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

I am truly humbled by your review Coyote, glad you enjoyed this one. Thanks so much.

[InsanityWriter]

Vey interesting. ;) Nicely done. ^_^

[Frieda P]

Thanks Skittles ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

Like an electric eel on Prozac?? xD That is classic. Why the hell do you not drop everything and get your a*s down to Florida...oh wait...there is no way My Brit is ready for THAT *laugh*

[Frieda P]

OMG how did I miss this one? Darn WC...i would have been there already!

[KAOlmsted]

xoxo

[Michael G.]

I'm glad this isn't pointed my way.
Let's not forget, there are bastardettes, also... with no heart at all.

[Frieda P]

That goes without saying Michael, but that's not my story....thanks for the read.

[Priscilla Sayers]

Why do I feel like finding and ripping said man to shreds???!!!! I love your voice dear sister, my new love! lol
Your voice is strong. It bites as it jumps off the page and let me say purge away!
Others may be jealous as I read and read my dear Frieda today.....
Much love.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much, that means a lot to me, lovely sister. Ha and please do, be my guest by all means!! xo

[Priscilla Sayers]

Of course I will! You must know I am most eager to hear your voice my friend;)

[Kaylor Mason]

Like an electric eel on prozac--I really adore that line!

(By the way, do you ever get annoyed by all these captchas we have to do? Like when we save a piece of work up here? For me they're dang inconvenient--we never needed them)

[Frieda P]

Ha I kind of like that one myself. I always make sure my work is saved beforehand, I've lost stuff that way....

[Kaylor Mason]

good point

[Baby Ricochet]

Cool.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Baby.

[.......]

What goes around comes around, I knew someone like this, Guy wasn't worth two cents. He had a cheating heart written all over him. Don't know why I put up with his crap. I guess we live and learn. Karma will bite him in the end one day and I truly hope I am around to see it happen. Liked this write, it burns with style!!!!

[Frieda P]

Thanks kaykay, not sure I believe in karma to be quite frank, they seem to get away with this sort of behavior a lot...

[Carolann Dowsett]

Too many lying cheating b******s in this world, oh and valentines sux. :-P Another awesomely expressed write Frieda.

[Frieda P]

I can see you have an opinion on this one Carolann! ;-)

Thanks...

[Carolann Dowsett]

Haha well yeah you could say that :-)

[Frieda P]

That's what she said. ;-P

[Carolann Dowsett]

Haha :-p

[Frieda P]

:-D

[Ayvid N]

I was simply blown away by this,

"Lies and random trysts
make up the composition
of your heart"

It so truly describes a cheat!
I hope you put that double-edged blade to good use and SOON! ;)

Simply Superb Frieda! Hugs!

[Frieda P]

Ha, sometimes I can feel the venom that oozes out of your responses! ;-)

Who'd mess with you, seriously sister?!! ♥

[Ayvid N]

You'd be surprsied how many actually dare, sister! ;)

[Frieda P]

Seriously, do they know you could eat them for dinner? ;-)

[Ayvid N]

Oh yesss!!! They do and more! They know I could disembowel them and their wife and have their sorry entrails barbequed for dinner!!!! ;)

[Frieda P]

OMG LMAO!! ;-)

[Ayvid N]

:)))))