Sea of Love

Could I drown in your essence

would you throw me overboard

should you let the waves take me

will you overflow my vessel

let me coast upon your fiery seas

ebb me from the shores of erosion

engulf me with impetuous high tides

emerge my senses in salty euphonic tides

undertows will not break my lifeline

rip currents fetch my spilling breakers
uprush like a hurricane upon a jetty

crest your summit into the depths 

volcanic hotspot of seamount eruptions

crash me to your shores of surging breakers
fully submerged in your tidal wave
calm winds buoy me to shore

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

Wow! The salt water is certainly calling my name if I get to get lost in it like this!
The waters of seduction in this sea are rolling at a tsunami pace!!

Yes, volcanic hotspot of seamount eruptions, come and crash me to those breakers!!
Steamy mist is rising!!!

[Frieda P]

Whoa Sheila, I think you left some heat behind on my thread! Thanks so much!

[Ahmad Cox]

Ah. I just felt a big sigh and release go through me when I was reading this poem. Thank you.

[Frieda P]

What a pleasant thought, thanks for that great review Ahmad!

[AYVID N]

"crest your summit into the depths ".....hmmm..... I am totally bowled over by this! The sea is where life began and procreation is in it's nature....So sex on the beach is sexy :)

The sensual imagery is done masterfully...images spring alive...Thanks for sharing this awesome write!

[Frieda P]

The ocean conjures up strange and forceful thoughts. ;-)
Thanks Divya.

[AYVID N]

:)

[Frieda P]

I know exactly what you're thinking too! ;-)

[AYVID N]

Oh my god! I should don my helmet!

[Frieda P]

Ha, now you know that won't help one bit!

[AYVID N]

;) i know...you have x-ray eyes ;)

[David Scott]

Now that was nice... I even said that out loud to myself. I don't think I could rest in that position on a rock, but I would try if she were there... Ha.
Actually I enjoyed the relaxation of this write. The ocean is always a place of calm and storm meeting and holding a truce until one fights stronger than the other.

[Frieda P]

Did it lull you into a false sense of security? ;-)

[KurKota]

Another enticing writing my friend ! You have mastered the sensous word painting !

[Frieda P]

Ooooo thank you, this just tickled me!

[KurKota]

You are welcome ! :) I will...I will....refrain from any tickling refrain !

[Frieda P]

;-P

[Jack...]

Shore I would... :)

Thanks for the early morning trip to the beach, it was breathtaking and beautiful, as it always is with your poetry.

[Frieda P]

Ha, always so clever in your reviews! ;-D

Thanks, I was feeling 'beachy'!

[Jack...]

Well, I'm happy to know you're dune well this morning

[Frieda P]

hahahahah, you slay me...have to think of dunes, we're getting more snow, I'll go insane! ;-P

[Jack...]

That sucks, it was 48 this morning and I thought it was cold.

[Frieda P]

Why I oughta................. ;-P