Sunset Haiku
A Poem by
Frieda P
Glorious sunset
relished end of day's longing
sets the skies ablaze
© 2013 Frieda P
Author's Note
Won 2nd place in Do You Haiku? contest...
Reviews
Oh, so very lovely..........I want to go there!!! Giuseppe took some pics of a sunset recently here in FL that this reminds me to post. It was a progressive view of about 5 pics.
I think if I had to say this much in this few words I would literally "burn up" in that sunset....lol
Great job!!
Posted 11 Years Ago
A beautiful image. It puts me right there. Where the oranges blend into vibrant pinks that melt into lush lavenders as the clouds streak in wisps across the deepening blue sky. I love it!
Posted 11 Years Ago
A beautiful image. It puts me right there. Where the oranges blend into vibrant pinks that melt into lush lavenders as the clouds streak in wisps across the deepening blue sky. I love it!
Congratulations...sets great mood
Posted 11 Years Ago
Congratulations...sets great mood
Grats! Thats wonderful :) Beautiful I love the dizzy feel of the pic, that went with it, love it ;)
Posted 11 Years Ago
Grats! Thats wonderful :) Beautiful I love the dizzy feel of the pic, that went with it, love it ;)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thanks Corset, yes it is kind of dizzying, you're right!
Just amazing, how you made me in 5-7-5 enjoy this view, you're stunning.
Thank you Frieda dear,
- Elisa
Posted 11 Years Ago
Just amazing, how you made me in 5-7-5 enjoy this view, you're stunning.
Thank you Frieda dear,
- Elisa
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you Eli dear, you're most kind.
11 Years Ago
You're welcome dear :) X
I could picture a the sun setting in a flaming orange sea! Great images created there.
Posted 11 Years Ago
I could picture a the sun setting in a flaming orange sea! Great images created there.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Nice imagery there Divya...thanks!
11 Years Ago
You brought it out with your inspiring words.
You've just whisked me away with the imagery of this wonderful sunset.... brings back memories of many a beautiful sunsets I've seen on my travels.
Wonderful ... :O)
Posted 11 Years Ago
You've just whisked me away with the imagery of this wonderful sunset.... brings back memories of many a beautiful sunsets I've seen on my travels.
Wonderful ... :O)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
I'm so happy it did, that's exactly what I was thinking when I wrote it! ;-)
Thanks..... read more I'm so happy it did, that's exactly what I was thinking when I wrote it! ;-)
Thanks....
11 Years Ago
Your welcome....
Beautiful haiku Freida.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Beautiful haiku Freida.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thanks Marie, glad you enjoyed it.
Lovely form, lovely haiku. (Lovely pictures, too!)
Posted 11 Years Ago
Lovely form, lovely haiku. (Lovely pictures, too!)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thanks Michael, nothing like a sunset especially from the beach.
Oh yes I can picture it now *sigh*
Posted 11 Years Ago
Oh yes I can picture it now *sigh*
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thanks Dale, I wrote it for that Haiku contest, they are stunning aren't they?
11 Years Ago
Oh hell yes :)
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Added on February 12, 2013
Last Updated on May 26, 2013
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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll..
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