Wild Heart

Wild Horses,

 wind rushing through your mane

I dream of riding bareback

rapacious with you

along the surf,

 throwing caution to the wind 

my soul had surrendered 

to a place of isolation and caution

 Engrossed by nature's pleasurable

 force for freedom

found my secret creature within 

        distracted by your rein of play

power of liberty and unrestrained,

 never being enslaved

Indulge my wildest fantasies

 to rope myself a steed

bucking my silly filly preconceptions

 of wicked stallions

jaunt with me on this excursion

 on new trails of adventure

I've sauntered for much too long

   my soul needs to barnstorm

I'll mount you reckless and uninhibited

 for wantonness's rush

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

And one becomes free from the restraints of that which squelches a spirit from running with the wind, playing at times with wild fire, dismounting the steed with wild abandon and then wanting to do it all over again..........ah, riding bareback on a wild stallion makes quite a statement - as did Lady Godiva when she protested her husband's unfair taxes!
Let go, be who you dream to be with a Wild Heart!!
Wonderful write my friend!!

[Frieda P]

Woo Sheila, you review just excited me! ;-) Thanks so much!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

absolutely beautiful, well done Frieda :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Neva.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Beautiful...enchanting write Frieda! This reminds me of the song "Wild horses"....
To feel free as the wind and go where wonton thoughts will take you...is such a rush of wild fantasies. Way to evoke nature's sensuality in this glorious piece! Magnificent!

[Frieda P]

I love the word 'enchanting' thanks so much for the great review Robbie!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This is a pleasure to read as it's about unshackling yourself form the past and enjoying life. I hope this is how you really feel.

[Frieda P]

i have my moments too John, that's how I felt whilst writing it...thanks

[Sami Khalil]

I dream of riding bareback

rapacious with you

along the surf,

throwing caution to the wind .
That did it for me among the whole too but these sum up the beauty of your intentions and desires. Like I said before you are a talented lady on the side of whimsical and brilliant...:)
Very surreal write...

[Frieda P]

Woo, I'm humbled by this review dear Sami....love it when you whisper sweet somethings in my ear. ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :) You are welcome.

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing artwork and poetry. Good to know the wind and freedom. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Very nice indeed, thanks John.

[I, Rene]

Lady Godiva strikes again, there is so much excitement and sexuality running rampant in this write, well done, I enjoyed immensely!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Rene, glad you enjoyed it.

[quinfinn]

i had no idea you had such a passion for the ponies, perhaps you would be interested to know that in Chincoteague, Va and in the outer banks of North Carolina there are ponies running wild and are part of the tourist attractions in both places...easy to see them in the summer months. i love the whimsical peaceful freedom of this write, Frieda, it brought me back to nature in my minds eye. very nice...

[Frieda P]

c'mon quin, who doesn't dream of wild horses? Sounds lovely, I will have to put that on my bucket list.

[quinfinn]

me....i have never dreamed of horses (that i know of)

[Frieda P]

I guess it's a 'girl' thing ;-P

[Michael G.]

Good thoughts here. Warm salty breeze and the ocean at your feet. Doesn't get much better. There is something about the feeling of being free when you are on the beach. Add a horse, wow!

[Frieda P]

An Italian Stallion would be nice for a romp on the beach. lol ;-)

[Michael G.]

lol

[Frieda P]

;-)

[khalid]

i think, wild horses are the best to describe our feelings because both are fast changeable in mood. i doubt that you meant by riding that wild horse how much your feelings are out of control. very enjoyable again..

[Frieda P]

One never knows, sometimes I'm not quite sure myself ;-)

[David Scott]

Now this is much better than riding a bike! My dear you have penned the desire of man and woman in the smae poem well. Oh to be the stallion in the stable of her need...
Wonderful my friend! I felt this one in my bones...

[Frieda P]

Well that's not where I was expecting you to feel it, but alrighty! ;-P