Wild Heart

Wild Horses,

 wind rushing through your mane

I dream of riding bareback

rapacious with you

along the surf,

 throwing caution to the wind 

my soul had surrendered 

to a place of isolation and caution

 Engrossed by nature's pleasurable

 force for freedom

found my secret creature within 

        distracted by your rein of play

power of liberty and unrestrained,

 never being enslaved

Indulge my wildest fantasies

 to rope myself a steed

bucking my silly filly preconceptions

 of wicked stallions

jaunt with me on this excursion

 on new trails of adventure

I've sauntered for much too long

   my soul needs to barnstorm

I'll mount you reckless and uninhibited

 for wantonness's rush

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

And one becomes free from the restraints of that which squelches a spirit from running with the wind, playing at times with wild fire, dismounting the steed with wild abandon and then wanting to do it all over again..........ah, riding bareback on a wild stallion makes quite a statement - as did Lady Godiva when she protested her husband's unfair taxes!
Let go, be who you dream to be with a Wild Heart!!
Wonderful write my friend!!

[Frieda P]

Woo Sheila, you review just excited me! ;-) Thanks so much!

[Corset]

This was f-ing righteous Frieda , loved it!

[Frieda P]

Woo....reviews don't get much better than that! ;-)

[C.C. Marx]

Someone feeling a little adventurous today?? We all have those days where our mind wanders and we only wish we could roam to the places where our thoughts go. Beautiful imagery, nice piece :)

[Frieda P]

No, was actually riding naked in the surf atop my steed. ;-P

[C.C. Marx]

Oh my.....now how to respond to that

[Nate]

dead space 3 bro take down the terror

[C.C. Marx]

WHAT??!?!?

[Frieda P]

Ignore him, it's the coffee!

[Nate]

terror!!!!!!!!!!!! zombies = terror

[C.C. Marx]

Will do frieda, this is just sugar-induced nonsense!!!

[Nate]

hmph

[C.C. Marx]

Calm yourself you silly bampot, this is friedas late no need to spam Kt!!!

[Frieda P]

Bampot, now that's the second time I heard that today!

[C.C. Marx]

That silly noodles, taught me it!! Shes a bad influence that one ;pp

[Frieda P]

I know right? She just said it to me too...ha

[s y e]

Oh dear goodness me! Tattle tailing are we??? Tut tut!

[C.C. Marx]

Oh dear I didn't think you would come!! Actually *swirls around in big comfy desk chair* we have been expecting you ;)

[Frieda P]

Too many crazies on one thread, it's libel to blow....

[s y e]

You were expecting me huh? Well I saw my name mentioned and was like oh sh!t

[Frieda P]

um, this is a no cussing thread... ;-P

[C.C. Marx]

Im just expecting someone else to show up.....someone, quick, mentions someone's name and see if they come!!

[s y e]

Haha, looks who tawwwking ;-)

[C.C. Marx]

Awe but we are just using our "sentence enhancers" ;pp

[Frieda P]

Moi? I never f*****g swear. ;-P

[s y e]

Hahaha, Mama F lurves me really..... I hope ://

[s y e]

YOU SWOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE OMFG YOU SWOREEEEEEEEEEEE
Holy shats!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

[Frieda P]

Nah, that's like an adjective in joisey :-)

[C.C. Marx]

S*** is going down I repeat its going down.....well not really I just wanted to contribute ;)

[s y e]

Sure it is!

[Frieda P]

Ha what did I miss?

[s y e]

I actually dont know! Im so frookin confuzzled!

[C.C. Marx]

Aren't we all?!?! I'm not sure what happened here.....

[s y e]

Omfg! Samers!!

[Nate]

hmph

[C.C. Marx]

Its been a strange day kiddo!! A strange, surprisin dat! And tomorrow should be just as interesting....

[C.C. Marx]

Still grumpy Nathaniel? ??

[Nate]

nope

[C.C. Marx]

That's good that means the coffee withdrawal has worn off

[Nate]

yep

[Frieda P]

Hallelujah!

[Nate]

wha

[Frieda P]

;-zp

[C.C. Marx]

Praise The Lord!!!!!

[Nate]

ur so late

[C.C. Marx]

I know but I feel asleep

[Emerald Seas]

Ah, which way to wander after reading this poem? A combination of wild thoughts, freedoms, and desires - nicely penned there, Frieda!
Have I ever mentioned I love to ride? bwahaha I'm tired - best I could come up with!

[Frieda P]

Ahh I love that it took you different places, what more could a poet ask? Thanks Sera.

[Rufus "Mr Blaque" Lacy,..]

This poem has so many meanings and directions, readers can make their mind wonder depending on the mood they are in, lovely poem.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Rufus, glad you read that way....

[Annabelle Lee]

How I wish I could be the one youve written about... but iaam far too tme haha

[Frieda P]

Hmm I get to differ, the Annabelle I know could drive that stallion mad! ;-P

[Lover Of Words]

oh this is so greatly beautiful and so amazingly perfect.. i have read this one about four times alread just because its a dimond so fabulous

[Frieda P]

Wow, thanks Kelsey, lovely review my dear friend.

[Lover Of Words]

Your welcome

[Frieda P]

:-)

[kublakhan27]

Jack stole my lines haha There is something about a horse in full flight that lends itself to lustful imagery...no reigns necessary on this ride haha ;P Nice work Frieda :)

[Frieda P]

Darn that Jack, you gotta get up pretty early in the morn'...glad you liked it! ;-)

[kublakhan27]

;)

[Frieda P]

Stop hanging out in front of that fireplace all day...! ;-P

[kublakhan27]

Haha I'm back at my place now...no more fireplace ;P

[Frieda P]

Awh poor baby, hangin out with the rest of us fireless peons! ;-P

[kublakhan27]

Haha it's not like I'm not a poor baby anyway :P

[Frieda P]

Oh stop it now, you didn't even give me Cohen, you think I'm gonna feel sorry for you now. ;-)

[kublakhan27]

"And he leans on her neck
and he whispers low
"Whither thou goest
I will go"
And they turn as one
and they head for the plain
No need for the whip
Ah, no need for the rein"

;)

[Frieda P]

OMG ♥♥♥

[kublakhan27]

Haha good think I know his catalogue huh ;D

[Frieda P]

No wonder you're so wildly creative! ;-)

[kublakhan27]

Haha nah I'm just channeling one of the grandmasters ;)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Beautiful Frieda full of passion and just a delight to read.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Carolann.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :)

[Night]

Awe Frieda, such the romantic lady you are today...loved this wonderful whimsical write...I hear the beaches in Hawaii are white and pristine, quite lovely this time of year...perfect for a gallop or two...=)

[Frieda P]

haha 'today', I know I was cranky yesterday. ;-P

[Androglossia]

They say, a horse is the projection of our dreams about ourselves and our escape from our mundane existence. For many others, wild horses symbolize freedom and youth. Your poem speaks of the same quality. The same passion. It only shows how young you are at heart:) Beautiful.

[Frieda P]

Is that so, interesting tidbit there, thanks Maryanne.

[Androglossia]

Yep:D You're very welcome!