Hungover Poetry Senryu

vodka is my friend

except when it slaps my pen

time out is a b***h

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

I don't mind so much the writing I do when I am in the bag as much as the reviews/review comments xD My New York B***h emerges when I log on zooted (as you have seen...think SpongeBob *laugh*) I swear to Christ, I need to install a blow and go on my keyboard...although...I'm sipping wine right now (Shut up, Puritans, it's Saturday) so that might not work. Wait. What was I saying?

[Frieda P]

Holy cats, how did i miss this one, yes the infamous langer kimmer reviews, the best!

[KAOlmsted]

Ha! xD I didn't even recognize this senryu, I was like when the fook did I read this?? Ah, wine...read moreHa! xD I didn't even recognize this senryu, I was like when the fook did I read this?? Ah, wine...

Anyway. I liked it...again xD

[PP]

I can feel my head hurt on this one!

[Frieda P]

Ha tell me about it!

[PP]

oooooouuch! Vodka and headache - like two sides of a coin!

[Frieda P]

Yes I'm on the losing side of that coin today!

[PP]

aaaaaahhhh have pints and pints of water! that is my advice..it helps and yeas coffee lol

[Frieda P]

Yes I know...not my first rodeo! Lol ;-P

[PP]

hahahaha!!!!!!

[khalid]

when we are enjoying something, time passes really fast, it is a real b***h then..as well as the fast ending of your sweet poem..another b***h..

[Frieda P]

Ha, funny review, I love it!

[khalid]

i love that you loved it..

[s y e]

Hahahaha, did you just call Vodka a biatch???? Or am I miss reading because that is sooooo funny! xD

[Frieda P]

Not really, would I do that? ;-)

[s y e]

Yes you would

[Frieda P]

:-D

[s y e]

Hahaha. GOTCHAA!

[Frieda P]

I need to change up my act here, I'm getting too predictable, like the kiss of death!

[s y e]

Hahahahahahhahahahah.
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That was funnaaaay!

[Frieda P]

MWAH, you screw up my mojo and I'll be hunting you down little noodle! ;-P

[s y e]

Whoopsie -flies away on broom stick- ill get my body guard to save me ;-)

[Jack...]

Especially time out with a massive headache. Still friends though...

[Frieda P]

Ha you read me. ;-)