Hungover Poetry Senryu

vodka is my friend

except when it slaps my pen

time out is a b***h

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

I don't mind so much the writing I do when I am in the bag as much as the reviews/review comments xD My New York B***h emerges when I log on zooted (as you have seen...think SpongeBob *laugh*) I swear to Christ, I need to install a blow and go on my keyboard...although...I'm sipping wine right now (Shut up, Puritans, it's Saturday) so that might not work. Wait. What was I saying?

[Frieda P]

Holy cats, how did i miss this one, yes the infamous langer kimmer reviews, the best!

[KAOlmsted]

Ha! xD I didn't even recognize this senryu, I was like when the fook did I read this?? Ah, wine...read moreHa! xD I didn't even recognize this senryu, I was like when the fook did I read this?? Ah, wine...

Anyway. I liked it...again xD

[AYVID N]

Time out IS a real B***H! The story of every Friday night! :)

Thanks for this smart piece Frieda!

[Frieda P]

Friday nights out with the gals, yep. ;-)

[Carolann Dowsett]

And that's one of the reason that I don't drink lol A fun write :)

[Frieda P]

Ha, you're defo smarter than me! ;-)

[Carolann Dowsett]

:-)

[Frieda P]

Lol I see you agree with me! :-P

[Carolann Dowsett]

Haha I am remaining silent on the subject :)

[Frieda P]

See? Smart! ;-P

[Carolann Dowsett]

:-p

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Well in the words of an Eagles song and given you post an average of three to five new pieces a day, 'You Must Not Be Drinking Enough'. Lol

[Frieda P]

You greatly exaggerate my dear friend, which leads me to wonder what else you embellish? Lol

[Baby Ricochet]

HA!

[Frieda P]

Don't say that so loud! ;-)

[Sheila Kline]

Ah, the words are looking kind of fuzzy, and the room is spinning, and I just dropped by glass of cheer!! Now, where is my pen???
Cute write, that slurps (or hiccups) with truth!!

[Frieda P]

Ha, you're too funny Sheila, thanks for the giggle!

[Emerald Seas]

Girl, get that bottle out of the drawer! Lol... Hangovers are a nightmare. Thankful I haven't had one in years

[Frieda P]

I hear ya, I haven't either really, but last night was a special night...thanks for the read.

[Emerald Seas]

Wish I could drink to oblivion some days, but alcohol hates me. I get sick before I can loose it! Couple of glasses of wine is my limit - and believe me, my pen has been slapped plenty of times by that little bit of influence!

[Frieda P]

ha usually doesn't happen to me, last night was a bad night to begin with so I decided to make it worse, you know how that goes...........

[Emerald Seas]

Yes, yes I do! ;-P

[quinfinn]

annoying as tipsy can be, i do some of my deepest writes when i have had a few trips to the fridge for beer. i guess it is a question of knowing when to stop drinking and when to start thinking.....drinking/thinking....i walk the line, so can you. nice.

[Frieda P]

I do most of my most depressing ones at that time. Usually I can certainly walk the line, just a bad night. Thanks.

[quinfinn]

alcohol reflects and amplifies your true state of mind (in my opinion) therefore you will be more honest and create more depth, no matter what you are feeling....

[Frieda P]

So I should drink more when I'm happy is what you're trying to say.......... ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A clearer mind is helpful in being creative... although when i am stoned I can understand the lyrics being sung that I couldn't when I am straight.

[Frieda P]

Ha! You just think you can Dale....!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

No no no, it os a proven fact :)

[Frieda P]

Yeah I heard Cheech and Chong did the survey. ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Dave'e not here.

But I am Dave.

I told you dave is not here, now go away.

[Frieda P]

:-D

[Lover Of Words]

Haha i guess your brain, and vodka and your pen arent always friends are they? haha

[Frieda P]

No, I made the stoopid mistake of thinking it'd clear my head! ;-)

[Lover Of Words]

hahaha be careful you gunna push all those words out of your head

[Frieda P]

Oh geez gawd forbid!

[Lover Of Words]

LOL

[Ahmad Cox]

Hehe thats funny well you know what they say a cure for a hang over is another drink

[Frieda P]

ha yeah, but that bites if you have to be at work!