Hungover Poetry Senryu

vodka is my friend

except when it slaps my pen

time out is a b***h

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

I don't mind so much the writing I do when I am in the bag as much as the reviews/review comments xD My New York B***h emerges when I log on zooted (as you have seen...think SpongeBob *laugh*) I swear to Christ, I need to install a blow and go on my keyboard...although...I'm sipping wine right now (Shut up, Puritans, it's Saturday) so that might not work. Wait. What was I saying?

[Frieda P]

Holy cats, how did i miss this one, yes the infamous langer kimmer reviews, the best!

[KAOlmsted]

Ha! xD I didn't even recognize this senryu, I was like when the fook did I read this?? Ah, wine...read moreHa! xD I didn't even recognize this senryu, I was like when the fook did I read this?? Ah, wine...

Anyway. I liked it...again xD

[icelandicblue]

LOL- writing and drinking can be very dangerous. Nice one Frieda.

[Clockwork]

I wish I could write after drinking, but it never seems to work. Coffee seems to be kinder than vodka, at least for me. So I'm with you on this one.

[Frieda P]

Ha I totally forgot about this one...depends on the mood you start out with I think..but mostly I write in the wee hours of the morning, so no vodka or coffee is involved.

[creativequill]

hahaha we've all been there ;) just write something crazy and look at later so you can go what the hell??

[Angel of Heart's]

And the aspirin to cure it is hard to swallow too lol
Good read Freida you made this heart smile... :)

[Michael G.]

I had something really brilliant to say about this,... but I've had several drinks too many, and I don't remember what I was going to say.
So, never mind.
(Truly, Vodka once upon a time, was my favorite drink.)

[C.C. Marx]

Haha that line between a genius poem and the spewing of nonsense, how often people cross that line....I wonder if some of them intended it or have a love for vodka as strong as yours!!

[Annabelle Lee]

Haha, I'm on poetic overload when I'm a few Amps, Monsters, Rock Stars, etc. Deep

[ScottTheScreenwriter]

My best writing comes from when I'm hopped up on coffee. You'd think alcohol would help but somehow it doesn't. Go figure ;)

[Coyote Poetry]

I write different kind of poetry when I drank. I saw the world with real vision. I believe we candy coat our world and good booze allowed us to see the real flow of our world. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

I think when you start out in a bad place, it just makes it worse, but yes I get that...thanks John.