A Poet's Perceptions
A Poem by Frieda P
Do you see heart and soul or merely a persona presented I bleed, I breathe, I love, I've lost What do you read, when you read me? A little girl lost, a mother of three sons a woman with desires Do you see the mad poet, perhaps only the smiles or can you dig deep down and sense there's that person within us all
Do you see me in yourself,
as I see YOU?
We all have pain, we have secrets, we have views we escape our reality for a short while and share our destiny, hopes and dreams... read between the lines let us overflow
There's hope for us all for a poet's heart never wanes even in the quietest times of all ready to leap without caution dive off a cliff, soar with pen in hand to trace all the colors of a poet ...the shades of life
© 2013 Frieda P
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you have expressed the poet heart beautifully here, frieda. and you have shown the reader a part of your inner being and challenged them to find you within themselves, clever moves which demonstrate a sharp mind and at the same time a deep and loving soul. i feel there is a little of each of us within each other if we only learn how to reach it. this is a glorious piece of personality, painted into a loving and soulful poem. very nice!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Exactly quin, that was what I was trying to say...you made it more simply understood. I think we al.. read moreExactly quin, that was what I was trying to say...you made it more simply understood. I think we all get a feel for one another through our writes, most poets let it all hang out, it's the passion of poetry. Thanks doll.
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I see you as a beautiful woman, a loving mother, a talented writer and a good friend...much love and respect to you Frieda...you are certainly written in my book of life...I loved this piece, I consider this one, one of your best...it's depth and character a testament of who you are...a wonderful loving soul...=)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Wow David, thanks so much...and you being the #1 preacher of love I take that as a huge compliment f.. read moreWow David, thanks so much...and you being the #1 preacher of love I take that as a huge compliment from you! ;-)
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11 Years Ago
Well deserved my friend...=)
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you have expressed the poet heart beautifully here, frieda. and you have shown the reader a part of your inner being and challenged them to find you within themselves, clever moves which demonstrate a sharp mind and at the same time a deep and loving soul. i feel there is a little of each of us within each other if we only learn how to reach it. this is a glorious piece of personality, painted into a loving and soulful poem. very nice!
Posted 11 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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11 Years Ago
Exactly quin, that was what I was trying to say...you made it more simply understood. I think we al.. read moreExactly quin, that was what I was trying to say...you made it more simply understood. I think we all get a feel for one another through our writes, most poets let it all hang out, it's the passion of poetry. Thanks doll.
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Added on February 9, 2013
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Frieda PNJ
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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..
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