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aMUSEment

A Poem by Frieda P
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Dedicated to poetry, as it is the common denominator in our love @ the WC....

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Silly poetry to fill in the gaps
so the crazies won't visit
and stay for tea
If we can't laugh at ourselves
someone else will beat us to it

Sad poetry to lay our heads
cry on the words
bite your lips poppy red
share your woes, wipe your tears 
with cathartic hankies

Sensual poetry to entice
quench the thirst
whet the fancy's appetite
sweet erotica to lay the bed
 pomp and tickle feathers thrall

Sweetness of
                silk thread poetry
                turns the head 
            dreaming
                     to soothe
                   the soul
                                   slide down
                                     the scope
                                                  of inspiration's
                                           brilliance
                                                 come out 
                                                            the other side
                                                               heart and soul
                                                          cleansed
                                                                 blown away 
                                                  relishing
                                                                  cascading
                                    intoxicating
                                   euphoria


                          
                               
                          
          




                                                                           
                                                               
      
                                      
                                               










                              
   
                                                                  
                                                                        
                                                            

© 2013 Frieda P


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sometimes, our beloved frieda is the court jester, sometimes the incurable romantic, other times, the brazen cynic and still other times a harbinger of pure sensuality and ....even...bawdy verse. you have raised so many emotions in this writer that i am loathe to try to put into words at times. however, you are consistently awesome!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I'm in love with your review quin!
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

let me know when you fall completely and hopelessly in love with me and i'll come scoop you up and w.. read more



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"with carthartic hankies"

sweet line...

great metaphor as always.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Glad you liked it jacob.
aha. and each is crucial to a literate junky's well being. bravo.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

So true Annabelle, thanks.
What a brilliant write! You hit every note with precision. Love the form you put together, too. It adds that little extra punch to already well crafted verse.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

What a brilliant review! I thank you so much Sera.
Poems describe how we feel or how do you look at things, in every different mood and point of view.
amazing write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Yes I agree, thanks Dalia for reading.
there is a poem for every mood, emotion, and feeling. Poetry is so many things to different people, so many different images can be evoked by one piece. I find it fascinating to see what readers get from reading a poem. So much relies on the readers perspective: it can be simple, complex, or in between, but the final meaning, and what one takes from the written word, is deeply personal and individual.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Indeed, I am constantly amazed at what some people get out of reading a piece, fascinating stuff how.. read more
ohh frieda what would we do if we didnt have you here with us??
eehh?? tell mi, so this is yet another piece of cake for us, or pudding to wash down our whole course after a hard day's work. you know the whole course, is the writing and the hard day's work is coming up with ideas to write about and then only be looked down upon by other people who do not understand us. well i loved it my dear!!
will always keep this at the back of my mind so thats they dont beat me to thats job ehh??

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Who would dare look down upon a poet? Let me at em! ;-)

Much appreciate your reviews.. read more
luviva

11 Years Ago

well come round ma house and u will get the whole lot of them (ma sisters)
Human behaviors and all that ails them, thirsts, hungers, poetry will either satiate or cause a frenzy if it's any good at all, lol, lovely work Frieda

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Or both Rene, thanks so much!
love it, no capitalization here as i have one of the newborn twins on the other arm

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Is that code or do you really have twins? If so, Cheers. :-)
I loved the sliding poetry of the last stanza... I could feel what I was seeing and the thought of the lines glided well.
Is this euphoria? I'll not admit to it just yet.
Two thumbs up from me.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Good, I love when you see my point of view, spank you very much. ;-)
 David Scott

11 Years Ago

Now your teasing me again. ;)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Sorry, I just love it when your cheeks turn red (pun intended) !
Poetry is such a way of life for you. There's a poetry for every mood, every emotion and every feeling. Your poetry reflects all the colors of life. You are truly a true poet Frieda!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I think we all feel that way to some extent, no? Thanks so much Divya, you humble me with your revi.. read more

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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