Suspended Prose

You breathe me lifeblood,

               evoke me from my slumber

My destiny was in the

                 artlessness of love

    I surrendered myself to peace

          of lucidity's aesthetic

        mine own inanity bore itself 

                 No kisses to wake

 the enchantment of winter

tucked away smugly wrapped

 in fusion of titanium

thoughts never to venture

                      flight again

I inhaled the magic elixir

                so that my  being could soar

      above perpetual weeping sleep's

 dying adulation of

      earthly amour without prose

                      Ecstasy & rapture

on the winds of passion

 I found my freedom

     locked away where pain and hurt

                         do not dare render

          neatly tucked on communion's

                 cloud nine surrender

Your veneration roused

  inert savages

cavorting blissfully

                    that dance of spirit reborn

    moonbeam wishes caught

 my piquancy

                    in naked wantonness 

i live in this banality of insanity 

        within this shuffle

~suspended~

 in this dreamlike stanza

         my breath transcends

wakefulness in arousal 

essence of poetry

Author's Note

Reviews

[Devanshu Rajput]

greatly fantastic...remained me speechles...one of the best work read on this land of writers...nicely designed...thanks for sending me rr regarding this to me...really enjoyable and wonderful read... Great piece of writting by a great writer...lovely piece...keep writing like this more...really appreciable...
gorgeous work...

[Frieda P]

Wow, it is I who am speechless now, thank you for that glowing review, very much appreciated!

[Jack...]

This, to me, was as if I boarded my magic carpet for my early morning ride.

Ecstasy & rapture
on the winds of passion
I found my freedom
Locked away where pain and hurt
do not dare render

Love this, it is so fluid and constant in its motion.

You breathe me lifeblood,
evoke me from my slumber

This line is so amazingly beautiful. they way you combine, arrange and purposefully place your words within these works amazes me. You have so much talent and I am envious of that talent. You are so deep in your thoughts and desperate in your design. Reading your work is like opening a new and exciting gift each time.

[Frieda P]

'Magic carpet ride' what a lovely thing to say Jack! You're too kind my friend, thanks so much for your rave review!