Suspended Prose

You breathe me lifeblood,

               evoke me from my slumber

My destiny was in the

                 artlessness of love

    I surrendered myself to peace

          of lucidity's aesthetic

        mine own inanity bore itself 

                 No kisses to wake

 the enchantment of winter

tucked away smugly wrapped

 in fusion of titanium

thoughts never to venture

                      flight again

I inhaled the magic elixir

                so that my  being could soar

      above perpetual weeping sleep's

 dying adulation of

      earthly amour without prose

                      Ecstasy & rapture

on the winds of passion

 I found my freedom

     locked away where pain and hurt

                         do not dare render

          neatly tucked on communion's

                 cloud nine surrender

Your veneration roused

  inert savages

cavorting blissfully

                    that dance of spirit reborn

    moonbeam wishes caught

 my piquancy

                    in naked wantonness 

i live in this banality of insanity 

        within this shuffle

~suspended~

 in this dreamlike stanza

         my breath transcends

wakefulness in arousal 

essence of poetry

Author's Note

Reviews

[Devanshu Rajput]

greatly fantastic...remained me speechles...one of the best work read on this land of writers...nicely designed...thanks for sending me rr regarding this to me...really enjoyable and wonderful read... Great piece of writting by a great writer...lovely piece...keep writing like this more...really appreciable...
gorgeous work...

[Frieda P]

Wow, it is I who am speechless now, thank you for that glowing review, very much appreciated!

[KeeD]

The music, the words, the symmetry of brilliance! "Ecstasy & rapture
on the winds of passion
I found my freedom
locked away where pain and hurt
do not dare render
thoughts never to venture
flight again" my favorite stanza, you're my favorite poet. LOVED IT

[Frieda P]

Wow Kee, I hardly paid you enough to gush like that, ha as the kimmer would say *laugh* ;-)
read moreWow Kee, I hardly paid you enough to gush like that, ha as the kimmer would say *laugh* ;-)

Seriously, thanks a million!! x

[Emerald Seas]

What a great writing, Frieda. Mesmerizing. Love the flow and power written with such a, what feels to me as, peaceful fever. If that makes sense. Nice penning!

[Frieda P]

Hmmm 'peaceful fever' can you get a shot for that? I want some... Thanks for the glowing review Sera!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you have that knack of writing about love, romance, positive things better than anyone i can imagine...

titanium is quite strong...it gives us a sense of inner power according to this piece...and words are our weapon.

very nice write...


again, showing your versatility

jacob

[Frieda P]

Wow, thanks for this jacob, I've learned a lot being here, and an awful lot from you....three months ago every single one of my writes was dark to say the least...this really made my day, more than you know!

[quinfinn]

this is insanely gorgeous. it made me want to comfort the writer, taking her gently into my arms and then into my heart, to tell her that she need not sleep forever. to show her how to fly again and awaken her from dreams to the beauty of reality. this piece goes in my faves....joisey goil.

[Frieda P]

Woo, I'm really high on this response! Is it possible to put a review in your favorites I wonder...thanks quin!!

[quinfinn]

as you desire.... you are welcome

[Distant horizons]

Beautifully creative piece Frieda. Thoughts never to venture flight again, says it all.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Lorry, glad you enjoyed it.

[s y e]

.... WOW! Damn mama! This was great, Im speechless... Again! >.< Hahaha
Wonferfully written!!!

[Frieda P]

ha, speechless, I find that hard to believe Oh noodleOH....ha thanks hon xo

[s y e]

Haha, its weird for me! xP Welcome, anytime doll ✯✯✯✯✯✯✯✯✯ xox

[Frieda P]

A star is born ;-D

[s y e]

Yeah! You!

[Frieda P]

Ha, I saw on the top of the heap... ;-)

[s y e]

;-) lol

[Lover Of Words]

No kisses to wake
the enchantment of winter
tucked away smugly wrapped
in fusion of titanium
thoughts never to venture
flight again

This was my favorite part, this poem is gourgous! this is one of your best ones... this is gourgous just like you my friend...
Love it
Nicely penned!! Oh and the music is amazing..

And the picture is just as beautiful!
All and all i am in awe with everything about this peice

[Frieda P]

I take it you liked it Kelsey? ;-) Thanks!!

[Lover Of Words]

Oh i didnt just like it I LOVED IT!!!

[Frieda P]

Doing a happy poetry dance! ;-)

[Lover Of Words]

yay!!

[Lover Of Words]

Dont hurt yourself!!!!!

[Frieda P]

ha it'd be so worth it! ;-P

[Lover Of Words]

LOL Okay but put a padding or something!!!! :P

[Frieda P]

what should I pad, the room, it has more of a chance of getting hurt. ;-)

[Lover Of Words]

LOL poor room! Protect it!!!

[kublakhan27]

This is just brilliant, I don't even know what else to say...I've been rather tongue-tied the last couple of days, but I think the word brilliant says it all ;)

[Frieda P]

I'll take brilliant, but you owe me. lol Thasnks so much k....

...and you know what I'm talking about! ;-P

[kublakhan27]

You're very welcome Frieda...owe you? No pressure huh haha ;)

[kublakhan27]

"I'm good at love I'm good at hate
It's in between I freeze
Been working out but it's too late
It's been too late for years
But you look fine you really do
The pride of Boogie Street
Somebody must have died for you
A thousand kisses deep"

[Frieda P]

OMG *fainted* *fainted* *fainted*!!!!

[kublakhan27]

LOL ;D

[Frieda P]

:-P ya done good hon..!

[kublakhan27]

I'll admit I had to look this up for the exact wording...I had the verse in my head but I had to verify it, cuz I want to get it right, and it just ain't cool to paraphrase him you know? ;)

[Frieda P]

You would have been forgiven if you misquoted my lover, I'd get the general idea ;-)

[kublakhan27]

Nah I can't bring myself to guess haha But I'm glad you're the forgiving type...otherwise I'd probably have about eighteen broken bones in my face for all the bawdy insinuations I send your way ;p

[Frieda P]

Wow, that would be something since we only have 14...unless you're some kind of freakozoid. ;-)

[kublakhan27]

Oh, there must have been four along the way that I just thought about but didn't say...;P

[Frieda P]

WHAT? We still talking bones here? LOL

[kublakhan27]

LOL Bones are never far from my train of thought...well one to be exact...will this be the hypothetical fifteenth broken bone? They are still hypothetical aren't they? ;P

[David Scott]

We do find emotion in writing, but you are correct... The satisfaction is only to a point. We are left suspended. Unfinished. Unfulfilled.
Well penned.

[Frieda P]

We find it in reading and also in writing it. It's oh so savory, but yes perhaps all too fleeting a moment. Thanks David.

[Dream Weaver]

Kudos for the music/video and a fantastic two thumbs up for this
extraordinary piece...

[Frieda P]

Glad you liked it Dream Weaver, I just recently found that piece of music and I'm in love with it.

[Dream Weaver]

I can see why...a beautiful tune indeed! But I do like your
write much better...

[Frieda P]

Awh...you hit me right in the heart with that one! ;-)

[Dream Weaver]

;-) my pleasure!