Drift Away

Let's float away

                          just you and me

                               above the clouds

                   our own peace of sky

                                            where poppies sing

           and birds do flips

          the moon

                          another chichi dimension

                                    we'll touch the stars

    the two of us

                                              burn every ember

                            till it sizzles

             Drift away with me

                      in my wafty bubble

                                where rainbows split 

                                       the air with confetti

 our eyes

                          will burn aflame 

                                       with lapis lazuli

                                      our hearts

                                              will meld

                                                   as one

                                                           like the

                                                                 fire

                                                                 of snowflakes

                     

Reviews

[s y e]

Awwww, the artwork is amazing!! She is truly talented!! How is getting on?? Any better???
I loved this poem!
'Where rainbows split the air with confetti'
Wow, what an amazing line, I think this is my favorite line! Well done mama! Amazing as always! xo

[Frieda P]

She really is amazingly talented, and a warrior....she's had one battle after another, but she never gives up, she's the strongest woman I know. I'll be sure to let her know that you loved her artwork, thanks Sye. xo

[s y e]

Yep :-) She is talented and definitely seems like a warrior. Hope all is well with her :-) xo

[LA Lorena]

I would love to go, but I have a flight to catch.:D Hope you get that journey soon. Send me a post card!

[Frieda P]

Stop rubbing it in LA! Safe flight...enjoy.

[Michael G.]

This is an excellent write and artwork.
Thought I was have a wee bit of a flashback there for a minute.

[Frieda P]

I see you've been, why doesn't that surprise me? Thanks Michael.

[Michael G.]

It probably shouldn't. Just a child of the sixties. This one just allows the mind to mellow a bit and just float along the easy flow you created.

[Frieda P]

Wooo, 'the mind to mellow' now you've made my day Michael!

[Lover Of Words]

This is beautiful.. Nicely done

[Frieda P]

Thanks Kelsey.

[Lover Of Words]

My pleasure

[KeeD]

Beautiful Frieda :D , just like you! You're entire personality reflects in this peace, graceful beauty with such poise and romance. I wrote a romantic piece yesterday and now I read yours and think wow I could learn a thing or two :D I loved it :P wonder who's triggered the spark to get you to write such an exquisite masterpiece!

[Frieda P]

Awh, you're the sweetest Kee! Your poetry was magnificent, don't let me hear you say that....and ha! I'll never tell....

[rnuff]

such a wonderful write

[Frieda P]

Thanks Shorty.

[Ruth]

Gorgeous!!!
Last read before bed here, I shall sleep peacefully lol ♥

[Frieda P]

What a beautiful sentiment Poppy, I hope you sleep well after that! x

[Ruth]

I did lol

[Frieda P]

Wow, now I'm putting people to sleep, not sure how to digest that! ;-)

[Ruth]

LOL Nah, sleeping better, HUGE difference ;) xoxo

[Frieda P]

ha! glad you cleared that up my friend. ;-) xo

[quinfinn]

i wanna go! very nice art, by both you and star. one of your better writes!

[Frieda P]

Ooolala, thanks quin!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

What a wondrous journey that would was... I ant my burdens to be light as a feather so I can float away to this Eden.

[Frieda P]

Wouldn't that be grand Dale,thanks.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

It would be simply marvelous :)

[Jack...]

Extremely cosmic and beatifully tinted with emotion. You are very talented in many facets of poetry and I believe this to be one of my favorites.

[Frieda P]

I'm humbled by your response Jack, much appreciated.