Forbidden Fruit

Forbidden Fruit

A Poem by Frieda P
"

EVEn Senyru

"
You'll lose every time,

 pointing the finger at us

 We still bare the fruit

© 2013 Frieda P


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As if I would dare :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Distant horizons

11 Years Ago

If you say so, it must be so :-)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

LOL ;-)
Distant horizons

11 Years Ago

:-)
Never say die temptress!
Let them say no - if they can!
:)

Loved the pic too!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Of course not, that's our mantra, right? ;-)

Thanks Divya!
And girl power is born haha ;P

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

LOL, could have been at that very moment, yep! ;-P
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

;)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

;-P
lol well that's a cheap way to win

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

hahaha, cheap shot is blaming us for all of life's woes ;-P
Haha, nice one. That's why I don't point fingers, i use what guys have: wit and logic. :P Although, I doubt any guy can argue once the fruit is bared.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

sure thing Booboo, Mr Quin lost his 'bearings' ;-)
John Stussy

11 Years Ago

Haha. Doubtless you'll put him right back in his place.
oh yeh? well, i carry the pollen!!!!! nice cherries!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

hahaha
Deron Alexis

11 Years Ago

probably he has a safety deposit box O.o
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

i certainly don't write "rubber" checks.....nyuk, nyuk

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