Petal Senyru

Read My Lips

What a woman wants

kiss my lips with much ardor

A sensuous touch 

Reviews

[Deron Alexis]

you put that picture on purpose didn't you ;) love your work you gonna get in trouble one day they gonna be all "(O.O) She's to awesome to be left alive (O.O) " but yes i think real women are those that care for love and tenderness and are willing look until they find a man with the same idea

[Frieda P]

ha no it accidentally fell into my page! hahaha you make me laugh out loud!

[Deron Alexis]

a lol a day keeps the shadows at bay XD

[Frieda P]

Well, hellfire, save matches, f--k a duck and see what hatches! That's always a good thing! ;-P

[Deron Alexis]

ok i made mine up if that just came out of your mind i need to get my act together XD

[Frieda P]

LOLOLOL! I can't take credit for that one, ha
Steven Tyler...he's actually crazier than me I think ;-P

[Deron Alexis]

poor duck :

[Frieda P]

Quack!

[Deron Alexis]

horrible horrible image you just put in my head that's gonna take a while to get over XD

[Frieda P]

oopsie ;-P

[Deron Alexis]

lolz

[Frieda P]

you better now?

[Deron Alexis]

yes i am thanks

[Frieda P]

Good I hate to part of any illegal kinky stuff going on in your part of the world ;-P

[Deron Alexis]

lolz kinky is not illegal here i think we're more kinky than the US

[Frieda P]

ha ducks?! whatever floats your boat hon ;-P

[Deron Alexis]

na here in the Caribbean we're all about double jointed girls XD

[Frieda P]

LOL!!!!

[KAOlmsted]

...and some shoes ;-) Maybe a matching bag.

[Frieda P]

ha the shoes are a given ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

naturally ;-)

[Frieda P]

;-P

[Penlady]

I have a cupboard full....what size? Women can have fun with any subject...love reading all the back and forth comments! Glad I found you!

[KeeD]

Kimmers when a man truly adores a flower, the shoes come off anyways?

[KeeD]

Oh but the morning after bag, sure that's a given!

[Frieda P]

erhum!

[KeeD]

LMAO^

[Frieda P]

this is girl talk, what do you know of shoes ;-P

[KeeD]

I know they're fookin expensive and made of unicorn skin

[Frieda P]

Bhahahahahhaa

[Frieda P]

where do I find a pair of those babies? ;-P

[Frieda P]

I hope they have the Latin one's in stock ;-)

[KeeD]

Haha I'd buy you a pair but then hey what do I get in return :P I like flowers, just saying.

[Frieda P]

I'm too old to buy you flowers hon, I feel like Mrs Robinson! ;D

[KeeD]

Buy me flowers?:P
And here's to you, Mrs. Robinson
Jesus loves you more than you will know (Wo, wo, wo)
God bless you please, Mrs. Robinson
Heaven holds a place for those who pray
(Hey, hey, hey...hey, hey, hey)

[Frieda P]

LOL!!

[Penlady]

I LOVE ALL OF THIS! LOL

[Frieda P]

haha we're a comedy act on the side when we're not writing poetry! ;-)

[KeeD]

Hey Frieda who's the pretty new face?

[Frieda P]

That's my new friend, Penlady...say hi to each other ;-)

[Penlady]

Hi Keegan! Great name and I love your sense of humor....You can call ME Mrs. Robinson, I'm old as dirt!

[Penlady]

Nite all, see ya tomorrow!

[KeeD]

Hi there cutiepie, i'm the resident boy toy. Haha just kidding i'm usually a lot more respectful just one of those days :P all thanks to Frieda :D Thank you we all need a good laugh now and then and that's what Frieda P. Poems do, brings the community together to appreciate great writing, have a lot of laughs and just enjoy being in each others company. Looking forward to reading your writing ma'am, send me a read request anytime.

[KAOlmsted]

...okay. I had to step away from the thread to click on Mr. F**k Normality to see who in the f*****g f**k it was, and lo and behold, it is my f*****g Kee! Making time with someone who ain't me! Driving me up a f*****g tree! When all of a sudden I had to...write a decree! (bet you thought I was going to say pee...you know, I really do have to tinkle...)

Did I review this poem?

[Whiskurz]

You write these well my friend....I love this form.....Whisk

[Frieda P]

Thanks Whisk, I find them a challenge sometimes when I need to get out of my head, glad you enjoyed it.

[Penlady]

YES!

[Frieda P]

:-D

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A kiss can tell you a lot about the others feelings, so wanting a kiss that makes you feel adored is understandable.

[Frieda P]

Make sure I'm high on that pedestal when you plant that baby! ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You got it, just don't hit your head on the moon.

[Frieda P]

ha! I don't see that as a problem Dale ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

What are you saying I am not strong enough to lift you that high? :-p

[Frieda P]

ha no silly, I'm saying I want my head to hit the moon, then over! ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Gotcha :)

[Frieda P]

:-D

[Lover Of Words]

You hit a cord with every woman thats for sure!! Every woman wants that man who is makes there toes curl!!! Love it!!

[Frieda P]

Among other body parts, YES! ;-P

[Lover Of Words]

Hahahaaha :)

[Frieda P]

:-D

[rnuff]

love this, so amazing

[Frieda P]

Thanks Shorty ;-)

[quinfinn]

brace yourself baby, and pucker up....it's sensual smoochin' time. hope your wearing the shoes with the pre curled toes!!! i love a sensual, slow, gentle yet firmly warm kiss....that's at the top of my "yum" list! very clever poem...

[Frieda P]

Yum, ha. You would....love that you're back! MWAH! ;-)

[quinfinn]

what? don't you know my favorite adjective for a beautiful woman is "yummy"? a woman should be savored like a fine wine and digested slowly over many fond thoughts and actions....

[Frieda P]

I've been mulling over this like fine wine, YES. ...

[quinfinn]

see? and you thought i was just another guy.....hmmmph! i dun tolya, i'm bogey and yer bacall...get it right sister

[Frieda P]

put your lips together and BLOW ;-D

[quinfinn]

see? that's the stuff that dreams are made of......yowsa

[Frieda P]

I'm with you on that one hon woooooo

[quinfinn]

here's lookin' at you, kid

[Frieda P]

Now I need to watch the Big Sleep....

[quinfinn]

i'll bring some camembert and avocado and the bubbly

[jacob erin-cilberto]

they don't want a bull in a china shop...

and some men actually prefer this also.

[Frieda P]

there's a time and a place for the bull to charge....

[LA Lorena]

A cunning write FP. I wonder how many fail to see the big picture in small writes?

[Frieda P]

I would dare to say the 'majority'. ;-)

[LA Lorena]

LOLOL. so it seems

[Frieda P]

:-D

[Frieda P]

I even supplied pictures!

[LA Lorena]

Maybe u should have drawn a map?

[Frieda P]

haha and nah....

[Frieda P]

That's too much work, if they need directions it's a lost cause! ;-)

[LA Lorena]

well, I'm just feeling rather superior now.

[Frieda P]

ha well I would hope you don't need one! ;-D

[s y e]

Hahaha, this is true doll. Damn, your a smart cookie. You know EVERYTHING !!!!! hehehe xox

[Frieda P]

haha, you're cute farfallehead! ;-)

[s y e]

*blushes* No no no, you are! You are beautiful! :-)