Blow to Kingdom Come

Tongue in cheek, or wherever...

You take it in,

 a little at a time

it'd be overwhelming, otherwise

you linger

 in it's essence

you use all your senses

it tickles, it teases, it grows larger

up and down,

 the process goes

get to the head of it

                     you get the feel of it

You feel that stoke again

                                 yearning, throbbing, pulsating....

you whisper

                       'is it good enough?'

         rimmed with exhaltations

                            brimming with anticipation

you can practically taste it

 slow deliberate strokes

                              perch those castles in the air

it builds to a crescendo til 

it bursts forward

 a surged ascension

it's like an explosion, 

                   it whets the appetite

It's a climatic arousal

                     like a nuclear reactor

BAMM you're there! 

An orgasmic expulsion!!

You ride it out.

It it written....

The thought process of poetry

 is truly arousing,

 ...what?

                     you thought I was talking about

                                             something else?  Silly..... ;-)

Reviews

[KeeD]

it builds to a crescendo til
it bursts forward
a surged ascension - WOW!!!!

haha the ending .. the famous Frieda P. quirky humorous twist :P
I love the way you write you have such good control and command over words it's like when you set mind to paper you create magic.

[Frieda P]

Control you say? ha ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Climax is always a great thing, no matter what causes it... because the climax also releases a lot of tension.

[Frieda P]

MWAH ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Hey, now you got lipstick on me, LOL

[Frieda P]

mmmm candy apple red, yummy

[KAOlmsted]

I feel like this every time I write something new...well done.

[Frieda P]

Thanks k...I didn't think you'd find it silly in the least ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

No I didn't...that silly John ;-) My pleasure.

[kublakhan27]

This is awesome Frieda...even though it ends with that disclaimer, it's hard not to get hot and bothered by this piece...love it :)

[Frieda P]

Really? I didn't think it'd have that effect...hmmm ;-)

[kublakhan27]

Haha well if the door is even slightly ajar for such an interpretation, you know I'm taking it off the hinges ;P

[Frieda P]

you're just a bad boy...it's all about glorious poetry!! ;-P

[kublakhan27]

Haha no I'm most certainly not a bad boy...it just happens to lend itself to that glorious poetry ;)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hugely silly!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Very silly!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Silly!

[Frieda P]

Silly like a barrel of horny squirrel monkeys!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

No I liked your offering and horny, squirrel monkeys like to playt too¬!

[Frieda P]

Hey it's all I got in two minutes! And that was quick John lol

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Premature you mean?

[Frieda P]

LOL you said it, not me!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Cow!

[Frieda P]

HAHA it was worth it, was it good for you? lol

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Well I am from the shool that my woman must enjoy before I do!

[Frieda P]

tastes like chicken

[Frieda P]

You land in a pressure cooker John? lol