Blow to Kingdom Come

Tongue in cheek, or wherever...

You take it in,

 a little at a time

it'd be overwhelming, otherwise

you linger

 in it's essence

you use all your senses

it tickles, it teases, it grows larger

up and down,

 the process goes

get to the head of it

                     you get the feel of it

You feel that stoke again

                                 yearning, throbbing, pulsating....

you whisper

                       'is it good enough?'

         rimmed with exhaltations

                            brimming with anticipation

you can practically taste it

 slow deliberate strokes

                              perch those castles in the air

it builds to a crescendo til 

it bursts forward

 a surged ascension

it's like an explosion, 

                   it whets the appetite

It's a climatic arousal

                     like a nuclear reactor

BAMM you're there! 

An orgasmic expulsion!!

You ride it out.

It it written....

The thought process of poetry

 is truly arousing,

 ...what?

                     you thought I was talking about

                                             something else?  Silly..... ;-)

Reviews

[KeeD]

it builds to a crescendo til
it bursts forward
a surged ascension - WOW!!!!

haha the ending .. the famous Frieda P. quirky humorous twist :P
I love the way you write you have such good control and command over words it's like when you set mind to paper you create magic.

[Frieda P]

Control you say? ha ;-)

[David Scott]

You are so naughty. I think every highschooler should read this in literature class. They would all love poetry more...

[Frieda P]

ha brilliant idea sir! ;-)

[Nirego]

Haha, very clever writing - I knew there was a twist, but didn't foresee that. Teasing in more ways than one, but also highly technical and well constructed.

[Frieda P]

It was a twist alright! thanks ;-)

[Tarry Franck]

Love the humor in this :))))) Job well done

[Frieda P]

...wait, humor, what humor? ;-P

[Coyote Poetry]

I wish I wrote poetry like this.
"It's like an explosion,
it whets the appetite
It's a climatic arousal
like a nuclear reactor"
Good to create a explosion in the flow of thoughts. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Holy what a jazzy review, this one blew my skirt up! Thanks Coyote....coming from you a great compliment indeed.

[writing mojo]

an erogenous zone of peeking...great piece

[Frieda P]

glad you enjoyed ;-)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Dam Frieda what are you trying to do to me lol A very witty, well worded write. :)

[Frieda P]

LOL I love your reviews!

[Carolann Dowsett]

:)

[Michael G.]

I liked the way you quietly and slowly built this up to a louder stronger sense of urgency. Even the second time I read it had this feeling about it. You punch line fit perfectly.

[Frieda P]

Seconds, I'm impressed. ;-)

[Jibey]

I knew you were tricking from the first lines! But you did it well... and are clearly accomplished in such arts... I've got to hand it to you, though, tempting as it is to give you a mouthful :-)

[Frieda P]

Now whatever do you mean by that? ;-)

[Distant horizons]

Caught. I so thought this was about a lollipop :-)

[Frieda P]

haha cute... sort of, poetry makes suckers of all of us at one time or another I suppose! ;-)

[Distant horizons]

:-)

[Frieda P]

;-P